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Justbleu
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0 posted 2000-10-05 12:20 PM


Catching me whole
Connecting to that in which
Does not exist
Lost inside the void
Of dissolution and threads
Caught up in the wind
Robbing the thoughts
That come waking up
Seething through my skin
Attempting to disqualify
What truly lies beneath
All that is kept inside
Is not all that one can see
Heart throbbing in pain
Knowing deep down the truth
Fingers throbbing hurting


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

© Copyright 2000 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
Justbleu
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1 posted 2000-10-05 12:23 PM


I do realize this may seem like other poems of mine...but I just simply typed this out...these are feelings and probably should have been put in "FEELINGS" but it is a poem.  I am finding that my best and most successful way to communicate is this way so here it is.....
Nan
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2 posted 2000-10-05 07:38 AM


I think this is very well done, Bridgett... You've expressed yourself nicely - We've all experience hurting "right down to our fingertips..."....
Justbleu
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3 posted 2000-10-05 02:09 PM


Thank You Nan!!! Nice to see you!!  And that is soo true "down to the fingertips"!!

Bridgette


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

tracie66
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4 posted 2000-10-06 02:26 AM


Bridgette~
Expressing ourselves through poetry is what us poets do best and you've done just that extremely well  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



EagleOne
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5 posted 2000-10-07 08:47 PM


I agree with Tracie, a wonderful expression. Glad to see you back!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

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6 posted 2000-10-07 09:50 PM


JustBleu~
Good to see you back in here with the
rest of us with those aching fingers.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kit McCallum
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7 posted 2000-10-07 09:55 PM


Wonderful thoughts Bridgette ... it's amazing what bubbles up from deep within, when we allow ourselves to really listen. Excellent writing here!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Justbleu
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8 posted 2000-10-08 12:21 PM


Tracie Thanks...it's great to think someone says I express my feelings well!!!  

And then you EagleOne agree with her...Thanks!!  

I'm always happy to be in here...it makes me feel great to know I have online friends....but I don't always feel this way....often I feel kinda alone!!  

Thank You Marge...it's nice to see your friendly words!!  

It is interesting what does "bubble up"....too bad it's not always good...but yet sometimes it is!!! Thank You Kit.... It is great to see you back...I hope you are doing well!!!  

     Bridgette
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"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


[This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 10-08-2000).]

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