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The Feel Of Your Lies
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The Feel Of Your Lies |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
The feel of your lies is like razor sharp daggers straight to my heart. The feel of your lies is like acid eating away at the strength of my love. The feel of your lies has torn away at the memory of your gentle touch. The feel of your lies has sent my soul to a hell I wouldnt wish on anyone. You are the one who let it go this far. You are the one who kept taking what I had to give. You are the one who told me we could try. If you had been honest I never would have had to know The feel of your lies. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'The feel of your lies has torn away at the memory of your gentle touch.' Ouch! Very passionately written! I like it!! sp  Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh Paula, this sounds like a bad thing happening. This was a great poem, went straight to the heart and could feel the knife. I can only hope that this is not the results of your happy relationship. Take care. Sandra |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I feel this one! Excellent. I hope he's in your past as he deserves to be. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Paula I am sorry to read this...you will make it thru this hon...and you will find someone to Love you...James |
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Tears_of_Grace Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 50 |
Ouch this one hurts I know that you hurt but I also know that you will reach within and pull out your strength. Hope it works out for you. [This message has been edited by Tears_of_Grace (edited 10-05-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
SP...thanks Sandra...Yes this is and thanks for your concern Ms.deVine...he is thank you James...as long as I have a friend like you I know I will make it Tears...thanks for your confidence and for taking the time to read |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
We truly do live in a world of emotional polarity, don't we? The same people who grant us intense feelings of love, happiness and ecstasy can be the same ones who inflict the sharpest pain. Up and down we go, trying as we might to find the person who places us gently upon level ground. Enjoy the love, endure the pain and keep searching, Paula. He's waiting. In case you weren't sure... I loved the poem! Very powerful, my friend. Trev. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula, take heart, this is an awful time to live through but you will be stronger eventually. This is beautifully written, as all your work is. Take care, and warm hugs to you. Marsha |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Its a shame when one person is so honest and the other is not...they insult your intelligence...i guess because they are too weak to be honest..is the reason i can think of...enjoyed..  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Trev...your generous words and encouragement mean a lot to me..thank you friend Marsha...I appreciate the hugs and wour kind words Victoria...I dont know either...thanks |
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