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Weaving us. |
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fool Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 61 |
Weave with me, Take the threads we twine, Coarse strands To silken finery, We design filigrees Embossed images of you and I, Burning stars across a sky, Picked out in deep deep blue. Weave with me, Take the threads we twine, We redefine future, As the fabric of our lives, Unravels in our hands, A union unplanned, With needle and thread, We create a unicorn, The horn a spire, Our desire the magic of creation. Weave with me, Take the threads we twine, Let the soft cloth slide against your skin, Let me slide against your skin, And the tapestry we wove, Falls forgotten to our feet, Our bodies meet, The weaving begins anew, Flesh for a frame, Fingers for needlework, Passion for colours, We weave like no other, We weave each other now. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A wonderfully woven poem  enjoyed it muchly |
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Collins Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 57 |
thats a cool poem. Some times the best poets remain unnoticed. If you don't get any more replys don't worry. in netpoets they sometimes don't appriciate good poets. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
so many wonderful lines here...so many wonderful feelings, I so enjoyed this... GE |
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fool Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 61 |
Dark Angel~ Thankyou kindly .Collins~ Thanx for taking time to read it my friend,there are a lot of poets,posting a lot of poems here,the powers that be do try I think, *smile*,to comment on everyone. Greeneyes~ *smile* thankyou,Im glad you enjoyed the poem. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
fool, how you do weave a tale. It's wonderful! Erotic, sensual,passionate and everything a good poems should be. It sings. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I really really REALLY liked this... those last few lines - they really connected. Great job! K |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Fool~ Your loom worked magic with this piece. A lovely write. And - please be assured that the other writers here DO notice consistently good poets ! Enjoyed this piece very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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fool Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 61 |
Kethry~*hug*thanks keth,you are a constant source of encouragement *smile* Severn~ thankyou Severn Marge Tindal~ Ahhh Marge *smile*,I hoped you'd read this one,Im so glad you liked it, I was kinda proud of this one *smirk* |
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