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Aimster
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0 posted 2000-10-04 08:10 PM


*~Relinquished Pain~*
Amy M. Kennedy--

For several years I held the pain within
Always afraid of showing the real true me
During all that time I carried the price of sin
Not mine, but another's...but I just couldn't see

But Karma stepped in making everything change
You came into my life from heaven above
And finally I was free, no longer in chains
My wonderful angel how I cherish our love

The past once held me and captured my soul
Darkness once secretly ruled my heart
Then with a ray of light, you made me feel whole
And now our future is a brand new start

The bars that once held me...hold me no longer
Your love was the key to the release of my pain
Now I'm finally able to mend...feeling much stronger
You freed me...whence into my life you came

The light of our love, makes the dark dissapear
And the darkness a thing of the past
It is my sincerest wish for you to come here
And for our love to always and forever...last


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"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"



[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 10-04-2000).]

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1 posted 2000-10-04 09:27 PM


Beautiful, Amy....true love will do that  
Dark Angel
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2 posted 2000-10-04 10:20 PM


A very beautiful poem to read, thank you!  
Waverly917
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3 posted 2000-10-05 01:42 PM


True love is the potion that will take away so much pain.  Beautiful.

Abra

"So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains
And we never even know we have the key."
-Already Gone, The Eagles

Irish Rose
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4 posted 2000-10-05 04:47 PM


ain't love grand!

Kathleen


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5 posted 2000-10-05 06:51 PM


I am glad that you found your love.
release your pain and let the love overwin.
Im happy for you, and loved to read your poem.

*hug* Charisma

Mark Bohannan
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6 posted 2000-10-05 07:38 PM


Ahhhh the wonders of true love.  Tis nice is it not?  Wonderful verse and much happiness from you in this one.  Loved it.
Kit McCallum
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7 posted 2000-10-05 07:51 PM


"The bars that once held me...hold me no longer
Your love was the key to the release of my pain
Now I'm finally able to mend...feeling much stronger
You freed me...whence into my life you came"

Wonderful sentiments Amy! True love is an amazing gift of freedom ... beautifully expressed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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8 posted 2000-10-05 09:45 PM


Love can break through the walls my friend. . .

Superb. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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