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John Yaws
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 860
Texas

0 posted 2000-10-04 02:49 PM



I dug down in the chest of drawers-
To get my entry fees-
In that baking powder can-
Beneath my BVD’s.

I checked the oil, and filled the tank-
Of my fifteen year old truck...
You brought me my old thermos,
And gave me a kiss for luck.

I guess you’ve gotten used to...
My goin’ down the road.
You’ve smiled each time I took a first,
And groaned when I got throwed.

You’ve always been there for me-
An anchor for my soul...
No matter if I win or not...
You’re gold, you’re solid gold!

I tried my hand at ranchin’
We had a few bad years...
It all dried up and blew away,
And left us only tears.

I keep on going down the road-
Although I’m gettin’ old...
You are the greatest prize I’ve won-
You’re gold! You’re solid gold!

"You come into this life crying, while the world rejoices. Your goal in life should be to live it in such a fashion, as to leave this world rejoicing,

© Copyright 2000 John R. Yaws - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
1 posted 2000-10-04 04:10 PM


What a lovely tribute to a patient woman...
Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
2 posted 2000-10-04 05:55 PM


Another solid Gold write GS I loved it~
vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
3 posted 2000-10-05 05:22 PM



Gunslinger-
i love this.  so much love and
appreciation here.  wonderful tribute.

-vicky



"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-10-15 01:37 PM


Beautiful! You know what's gold? Your writings!  

Denise

[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 10-15-2000).]

Moon Dust
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5 posted 2000-10-15 01:53 PM


Awww how sweet

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


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