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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-10-04 11:44 AM


She Sleeps

She sleeps, and
dreams of dreams
midst angel’s wings
hears the songs
the angels sing

she feels the breath
of love’s lost call
she is lifted up
she will not fall

she is not lost
in this reverie
but lo she’s found
absolute majesty

and she would gaze
‘pon his face
and be taken up
in his embrace

lo in this, the
dream of dreams
she is clothed
as if a queen

and beside her
midst angel’s wings
stands the man
of which angels sing

in silent repose
she shifts in sleep
a voice fulfills
all desires deep


4 October 2000
©Karilea Rilling Jungel



© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Aimster
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1 posted 2000-10-04 12:03 PM


Karilea~
*clapping*~
this is astounding sweetie. simply breathtaking i must say. i love the style of writing and the format. excellent piece!
take care.
amy  

"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"

Chanson
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2 posted 2000-10-04 12:58 PM


Wow~...This is beautiful, Sunshine!
Thoroughly enjoyed  

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-me, Song of Gesture



Martie
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3 posted 2000-10-04 02:02 PM


Dreamy poem, Karilea!
Gemini
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4 posted 2000-10-04 02:19 PM


Sunshine-Truely a lovely piece, I had to read it twice and liked.
Marsha
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5 posted 2000-10-04 02:56 PM


Karilea, this is another of your shining gems, applause, bravo's and bouquets. All in abundance.
Take care
                     Marsha

Sunshine
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6 posted 2000-10-04 03:04 PM


Thank you all very much...this was a pleasant little piece to pen...

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


Sven
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7 posted 2000-10-04 06:20 PM


The dreams that we dream my friend. . .

This was wonderful. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


doreen peri
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8 posted 2000-10-04 08:02 PM


you've been peaking into my sleeptime again, eh, karilea? WOWOW!! loved this!  
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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9 posted 2000-10-04 09:12 PM


Lovely!  Just lovely!  Delicately worded and beautiful.


Sunshine
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10 posted 2000-10-05 09:11 AM


Sven, Doreen, Rosemary...thank you all...

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


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