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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
Tingling from head to toe An explosion of pure delight Colors swirl in infinite combination Unlocking heart and soul Desire released Passion escaping Threatening sanity Loss of control Hearts as one Spirit of fire Melting the two into one A mind not our own Belonging to the whole One wink Two winks Left breathless First kiss Ok I just thought I would post this last one before bed considering I haven't felt this much inspiration in a long time. It just feels so good.  The White Wolf |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
We all should feel so inspired....this is perfection  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Unlocking heart and soul Desire released Passion escaping Threatening sanity Loss of control Hearts as one Spirit of fire Melting the two into one inspired through bedtime huh....love the passion in it.... and thank you for your reply on my poem, for your story....it helped me more than you will know. hope to see more from you Charisma |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ah...how well you write it...the first kiss is always tingly very nice write! hugs, dg theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Its always nice to be inspired by someone special..even if its just for a little while...enjoyed.. |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
Jeffery Carter- You have written some wonderful stuff too. I am honored that you see this piece as perfection. I certainly hadn't thought it was. Thanx. Charisma- I am glad to see that my experience has helped someone. I am also happy that you like the poem. dgvarner- Yes the first kiss is always a little tingly. It has been many years since that first kiss but she is still the inspiration for most of my poetry like this. The White Wolf |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
As a side note, I would like to say that I hope this is a tribute to all of those first kisses that reside within our own memories. The White Wolf |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
you described a first kiss to the T and also so beautifully! wonderful expressions from the heart. awesome inspiration & yes i see it as a wonderful tribute. take care. amy "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Beautiful!!! That's all I could really think of!! You obviously have been inspired by something quite beautiful and special to write such touching and heartfelt poetry!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
Victoria- Sorry I missed you last time, just scatter-brained you know. Yes she most definitly is a special woman even if her heart no longer belongs to me.Aimster- Thank you(blushing alittle). You are too kind. I am but a simple man who has had the pleasure of a kiss from a special woman. Justbleu- Inspiration from the heart. Thank you. The White Wolf |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi White Wolf, This was so sweet, the first kiss the one you never forget, very much enjoyed. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Waverly917 Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 90Hugo, MN |
Ah, my first kiss, hehehe! Thanks for sharing and bringing back such a wonderful memory! Abra "So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains And we never even know we have the key." -Already Gone, The Eagles |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
I am sorry for not responding sooner but I forgot to check the box so that it would send me email when I had a response. Cerenity- Your first kiss or the poem?  Waverly917- Sorry to have ruined it for you. Your first kiss should of been someone other than me. I am glad you all like it. Short and to the point. The White Wolf |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
And I too am glad that you posted this. I just found it on the last page and it is so beautiful just as most first kisses are that I feel it needs to shine some more. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
A wonderful topic that you have handled so well. I really enjoyed it. Dee |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Ummm, well, wowwwwwww...Yep that's how I would describe it....this is wonderful WW. Juls |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
White Wolf, Very nice writing. You have described it perfectly. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Mark- I am glad you found this poem and deemed it worthy enough to go back to the top. Dee- I am glad you liked it. Thank you. Juls- Well, umm, wowwwwwww...I don't know what to say. Thank you. Lone Wolf- I was lucky enough to find the words to describe it. Thank you. The White Wolf |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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