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White Wolf
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Somewhere in the vast wasteland

0 posted 2000-10-04 05:12 AM


Swirls of blue and white gold
Depths of the darkest sea
The entire universe confined within
Golden rays of hope
Images of joyous love beneath
Love, oh so trapped
Playfully teasing senses
Passion of the fire
Longing for freedom
Looking into your eyes
As the sun sets

The White wolf



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Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-10-04 05:17 AM


Loves release rests in the hearts of the knowing.  Wonderful penning and such a beautiful sunset.
White Wolf
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Somewhere in the vast wasteland
2 posted 2000-10-04 05:22 AM


Thank you.  Tis a sunset I shall remember forever.


The White Wolf

kitkat
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since 2000-01-11
Posts 878
Nova Scotia
3 posted 2000-10-04 10:33 AM


Sunsets are wonderful...What a gorgeous image you created in my mind.

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat you better
You're gonna find, yes you will
That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King



White Wolf
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Somewhere in the vast wasteland
4 posted 2000-10-04 07:47 PM


Thank you.  It is short but am glad it has created such an image for you.

The Whit Wolf

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
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Michigan
5 posted 2000-10-04 09:40 PM


A perfect view...I enjoyed this very much. Thank you for sharing this sunset with us~
Aimster
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6 posted 2000-10-04 09:50 PM


Swirls of blue and white gold
Depths of the darkest sea
The entire universe confined within
Golden rays of hope

some ver powerful lines you have here
enjoyed reading this tremendously.
take care.
amy  

"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"


White Wolf
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Somewhere in the vast wasteland
7 posted 2000-10-04 11:57 PM


Butterflies_dont_cry- I am glad I could provide this beautiful sunset.

Aimster- I can see you enjoy power.  I am happy that you liked it.

The White Wolf

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