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Michael G
Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-10-04 04:23 AM


Would you glimpse the stars
and wonder do my eyes see you.
Would you listen to the wind
knowing I was holding you still.
When all feels lost and gone
would you still say my name.
Or has my time come and gone
as you move on again.
Would you sleep in my arms
though only my spirit lay there.
Would you kiss me in your dreams
knowing our time is shared.
For all the tests we have
or the many more to come.
Do you know how I need you
and that you have all of my love.


To those that wrote me over the past few days, I say a very gratefull thank you. Your words touched me. I thought I could leave this place and not return, but I found that I missed it all too much. So I return, and fight the good fight, or so they say.
Thabk you
Michael G

© Copyright 2000 Michael G - All Rights Reserved
White Wolf
Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371
Somewhere in the vast wasteland
1 posted 2000-10-04 04:27 AM


I like it!!  I am most glad that you are staying and posted this wonderful piece.  I look forward to more.

The White Wolf

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-10-04 08:01 AM


Would you kiss me in your dreams
knowing our time is shared.
====================
this is a beautiful, sincere poem Michael,
reads like a whispered promise in the night...
very beautiful indeed ..
and I just knew ya couldnt leave me *winkwink*  
take care my sweet poetic reflection
me

Marina
Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario
3 posted 2000-10-04 10:43 AM


Michael, I am so glad you have choosen to stay.  I was already missing you wonderful poetry.

I love this poem.  It is sincere and from your heart. Your last two lines couldn't have been any more honest.  

Marina


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley



WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 2000-10-04 10:53 AM


So romantically expressed! (sigh)

Glad to see your back to fight the good fight!  

<*\\\><

I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

Marina
Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario
5 posted 2000-10-04 03:59 PM


I forgot to add this to my library!  Ya I know........DUH!!!  

Marina


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley



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