»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #10
»
Expressions and Impressions
| Open Poetry #10 |
|
Expressions and Impressions |
|
|
Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State 
|
Ok, forgive me....This is a recent repost, I know. But right after I posted it we moved on to Open #10! I know, I know...I'm being selfish! So kick me  heheheExpressions and impressions on this screen your words of rhyme Thoughts in the brightest of inks printed permanently in my mind Expressions and impressions on this soundtrack you record Tones of laughter and joy ring in my ear with sweet accord Expressions and impressions on this loom you weave in gold Strength and comforts of warmth interlaced through out my soul Expressions and impressions on this paper you gently sketched Colors of a rainbow full in my eyes forever etched Expressions and impressions on this canvas you’ve brushed your art Visions of such beauty and love forever painted upon my heart ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Sheri - All Rights Reserved | |||
Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Irie~ I'm so pleased you brought this one forward - 'Expressions and impressions on this loom you weave in gold Strength and comforts of warmth interlaced through out my soul' Just a beautiful expression of what poetry is all about ... weaving the words. A beautiful tapestry for all the world to see. 'Expressions and impressions on this canvas you’ve brushed your art Visions of such beauty and love forever painted upon my heart' Such an artistic view of the effects our poetry has on others. Thank you for this stirring post. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Thank you so much Marge.....your comments mean a lot. I don't post often, and when I do I try and make it worth while.  Again, many thanks to you. I'm glad you enjoyed..... ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
||
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Expressions and impressions on this loom you weave in gold Strength and comforts of warmth interlaced through out my soul Expressions and impressions on this paper you gently sketched Colors of a rainbow full in my eyes forever etched Expressions and impressions on this canvas you’ve brushed your art Visions of such beauty and love forever painted upon my heart =============== this is EXCELLENT! Im really glad you brought this over in here Sheri... a lot of great poems get lost in the change over to forums and even day to day with so many poets here posting now... Im glad to have not missed this... your repetion of the title lines is perfect.. makes the poem as does the imagery and message of the poem great read ...great writing you leave your own poetic impression... take care jm |
||
|
Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Hey there girlie.... I thought you were leaving us? Oh, I'm not complaining....it's great to see you here. Tahnk you so much for your reply and comments to this post. I'm happy I've made an impression Hope to see you again soon...... ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
||
|
Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Irie, Thanks for the repost!! I missed this one somehow. Wow, what wonderful thoughts and feelings you have shared with us. I feel the same way about the poetry I read here also. Just cannot seem to get enough of it at times. It always leaves an impression on me. Great writing. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
||
|
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sheri, selfish? YOU? NO WAY!!  Anyway, I really liked this poem the first time that I saw it. . .and now, I still like it. . . It's always good to see you. . . and you always make a good impression ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
||
|
Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Sven and LW, It's amazing what impacts our lives isn't it? I jsut wish I could keep up with ALL of the posts. Thank you for your comments! ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
