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0 posted 2000-10-04 12:24 PM



Soul of the world I carry in my heart,

I fill the Amazon with the monsoon of my tears,

Lighting strikes when I blink my eyes,

Hurricanes are formed heeding my cries,

Shattering earth feeling my pain,

Rainbows of the world showing my gain,

Ocean roars like a locked up beast,

When someone decides on my soul they will feast,

Time and space become a thing of the past,

When they mess with someone who’s powers are so vast.
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Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)




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1 posted 2000-10-04 05:21 AM


Spoken like a true God.
Mark Bohannan
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2 posted 2000-10-04 05:28 AM


The powers of nature resting within your realms.....well written and bowing before you in admiration of your universal control.
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3 posted 2000-10-04 10:34 AM


Not only in control of your pen
but in control of the forces of
nature. Very nicely done.

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4 posted 2000-10-04 08:55 PM


Thank you very much people.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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