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snowpants
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since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

0 posted 2000-10-03 11:31 PM

Take me away
On the wings of certainty;
Take me to a place
Where I can be sure
Of my steps.
You are beautiful;
No lack of inspiration
Can change that.
Don't take this moment
From me;
I'm rejoicing at
My glorious find.
You've taken my breath away;
Don't ever go.
I'm dreaming of you
Each moment
My head lies on the pillow.
I can't believe
How I long for
Someone like you;
My heart aches
To be near you.
When the muse
Seems to be
Nowhere in sight,
I am proven wrong
The moment I lay eyes
On your beautiful face.
Be careful with my heart--
It is not only vulnerable
To your smile,
But prone to melt
At your touch.

Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2000-10-03 11:36 PM

Think he would be melting as well after reading the dedication in this little gem. Wonderful write and full of conviction.

just_another_fe
Member

since 2000-02-05

Posts 483
MICHIGAN

2 posted 2000-10-03 11:40 PM

This is beautiful. I think everyone looks for the one person you described and hopefully one day we will all find that person. Good Luck to you.

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

3 posted 2000-10-03 11:43 PM

Thanks, Mark! I really hope you're right!!

just_another_fe: Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!

sp

Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

4 posted 2000-10-03 11:46 PM

your so right snowpants when you find that person that you look at and you feel like your going to swoon, and your heart starts palpitating a hundred miles an hour, you know your only thoughts are of him, it's then that you realize you can't be without them. This is so beautiful.

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

5 posted 2000-10-04 12:17 PM

Thanks for the compliments, RB! Glad you liked!!

sp

Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2000-10-04 08:38 PM

                  "Be careful with my heart--
                  It is not only vulnerable
                  To your smile,
                  But prone to melt
                  At your touch."

Ohhh how this hits close to home.....thank you for writing this...

GE

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

7 posted 2000-10-04 09:24 PM

SP*
I loved the sentiments in this...a beautiful read~

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

8 posted 2000-10-04 10:21 PM

Greeneyes: Thanks for letting me accomplish the one thing I want to do with my writing: touch other people's hearts. Glad you liked it!!

Butterflies: thanks for reading! glad you could drop in! good to 'see' you around!

sp

Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier

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