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Wesley the Blue
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0 posted 2000-10-03 04:31 PM



It is to you that my spirit flies
Over the cold blue waters
And the red and gold leaves
To be with you once more

It is for you that my spirit flies
To join in you dance
Way up high in heaven
To weave with you in love

It is because of you that my spirit flies
In its joy unbounded
Feeling your love for me
So much more than I ever dreamed

So it is that my spirit flies to you
For we are miles apart
All the love kept inside spills out
And takes to wing to meet with you

Keith Wesley Mullin

Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you.


© Copyright 2000 Keith W. Mullin - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-10-03 04:59 PM


DerKeit, Sir, this is wonderful! Thank you...

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


Wesley the Blue
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2 posted 2000-10-03 10:31 PM


Thanks for reading sunshine.

Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you.


SEA
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with you
3 posted 2000-10-03 10:34 PM


Keith~ this is WONDERFUL!!   -SEA
Mark Bohannan
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4 posted 2000-10-03 11:20 PM


Keith....wonderful write....so glad that I caught this one.  Your quill did a wonderous job for you.
Artistic
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5 posted 2000-10-03 11:24 PM


Although we have yet met, I thought your poem was a wonderful read.  Well done.  

~Artistic~

"Dreams are the touchstones of our characters"
-Henry David Thoreau



snowpants
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6 posted 2000-10-03 11:54 PM


Wow!  So much romance out here tonight!  
Great poem!  I loved it!

sp


Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier

Waverly917
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7 posted 2000-10-04 02:32 PM


Oooooo, I can just picture it!  What a wonderful poem!

Abra

"So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains
And we never even know we have the key."
-Already Gone, The Eagles

Gemini
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8 posted 2000-10-04 02:37 PM


The spirit of strength when far apart, you've captured it well, nicely written.
Dawn Eclipse
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9 posted 2000-10-04 10:20 PM


Keith!  Wonderful job!  I enjoyed this one a lot.. plenty of images for my tiny mind.  

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*


Paula Finn
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missouri
10 posted 2000-10-04 10:46 PM


how very lovely...romantic and sweet
Wesley the Blue
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11 posted 2000-10-05 05:13 PM


Thank you all for reading

SEA:  Glad you liked it.

Mark:  Thanks for stopping by, Im glad you enjoyed it.

Artistic:  Thank you

SP:  Seems to be the theame around here recently doesnt it.  Thanks

Waverly:  Thank you.  Hold on to that image, someone out there is bound to fly to you some day.

Gemini:  Thanks

Cassers:  Your mind is NOT timy

Paula:  well a guy has to give them some reason to stick around.....

Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you.


Charisma
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12 posted 2000-10-05 05:27 PM


how did you know that I love to fly high...
great work, love it  

Wesley the Blue
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13 posted 2000-10-06 10:28 AM


Dont we all like to fly high, charisma?  And what better way to do it than on the wings of love.

Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you.


Kit McCallum
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14 posted 2000-10-07 10:35 PM


Beautiful sentiments Keith! What lovely images you've woven of spirits lifting and soaring amongst the heavens to meet in love. Wonderful!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Alwye
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15 posted 2000-10-07 11:38 PM


Very sweet and beautiful Keith!  Well done my friend!  

*Krista Knutson*

"Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious

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