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BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
Heres another post about a friend that was just taken away from me resently, She ment alot to me and my friends and its about our missing her and out regrets...July 11, 1981-Septemeber 20, 2000 (RIP our Sunshine) Taken Away You think if all the should ofs', would ofs' and could ofs'.. till the day has come and you said good bye but not the way you wanted too Tormented by the past, blaming yourself, and I, blaming myself.. Harsh words spoken, the future looked crumbly, not there to hold you up I wasn't there, I wasn;t there.. Turned around and you was gone, your not there.. Standing silently to the when the final realization is there that we won't hear your laughther, we won't see your smile.. We wasn't there, we wasn't there... Promises broken, a special person you was, to touch each of lives.. You was there, you was there.. A sister no less, a sister no more.. We turn around and look back.. but you fell, far away for us.. We tried to get you back, We were there, We were there We tried listen to your tortured pleas, we stood by you through think and thin We was your family... Sisters we were, Sisters we'll be We made a pact to visit each in when we each slowly demise in to the bliss of nothingness.. Promise to Keep, Promise to keep We heard your laughter today.. We heard you call out our names... Was you there? Or was it just a play on our mind? We Heard the laughter.. Take away the pain, We fear we can handle it No more.. Bring Back our Sunshine, Bring Back her Smile, Her Laughter, Her Voice.. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
BirdeeB~ This is so sad......my heart hurts for you.  -SEA |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Awww, this is so very sad. Very well written and very deep. Be strong! Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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Waverly917 Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 90Hugo, MN |
This is so sad. Remember all the good things,a nd the things you loved about your friend and she will never be too far away. Abra |
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BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
RIP July 11, 1981-Sept. 30 2000 Sorry miss print |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
I'm so sorry about your loss. You have given a great tribute here. Very nice poem. sp Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BirdeeB~ Oh, my ... how this speaks to my heart this day - 'A sister no less, a sister no more.. We turn around and look back.. but you fell, far away for us.. We tried to get you back, We were there, We were there' Soft tears flow in remembrance. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
I thank you all for your support, It hasn't been easy dealing with it and it hurts alot..Thank you all Brandi |
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