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Poet's Fit |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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To understand that some do not, and know, it matters not a twit. I dip my pen in blood of heart, smear my tears, in poet's fit. No worry, if the reader mumbles, if perchance, the dancer, stumbles-- a fist, in clench, upraised to sky-- collapse, defeat, with questions why. No lessons, have I now to give, I only have the life I've lived. Every day, another verse... sometimes better, sometimes worse. I cannot fight the changing tide. But know you all, I will survive. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
serenity....marvelous.... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I thank you, Karilea, for your reply...was lovely of you to pop in...made me feel better, you did...but...instead of writing a rant about a lack of replies, methinks, I'll pop into one of the workshops, and see how I can improve...smiles to ya, with much love to all....(and by the way, "Karilea" is a beautiful name...) |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
I liked this one. I could feel it as I read. Great work. Keith W. Mullin Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You're going to try to improve? Oh, no! Now I know there is no hope for me!!! You'll be perfect in no time! I liked this one very much. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
but your so cute when you stomp around in the forums  *sigh* ... they say its lonely at the top baby ...*winkie winkie* tell ole bill shakes hey for me while your hangin with him... seeings how ya wrote this ADORABLE Lil Serenity stomps sonnet ... way cool ...yes you are ... later me cadence gator me |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
OHHHH.....SOMEBODY PAY ATTENTION TO ME!!! ROFLMAO...Thank you so much, m'friends, I think I would have virtually flooded the forum to make somebody say "hi!" today....okay, I'm over it. Maybe. But truly, thank you much, and I am quite serious about the forum workshops...to me, it was like finding a goldmine in my backyard...I suggest everyone check them out...you've got nothing to lose, y'know? |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Okay , so I am late....bend me over and spank me then if it will make you feel better.....(please)  I think I like the serenity with attitude. Yeah....I think she will do...now go stomp your feet some more for us will ya...and do something with that hair!!!!!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wow. . . remind me to never have you angry at me ok serenity? Excellent my friend. . .we do see different sides of the same thing. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
you just described how and why we all write, serenity. I could use a few pointers myself. Can I e-mail ya, please???? |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
No apologies never = you are who you are and I see 'great' - keep writing this well - I won't miss one! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
hey....attitude or not.....I say you are going to the top again....  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
serenity...hey, attitude is everything you know...you keep speaking your mind, you hear..cause I like you, and your mind! (and this poem) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Why you petulant little poet ! ! What class are you teaching in the workshop ??? Oh ? How to write from the heart ... sign me up !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
I think the top is a great place to be. And no matter what you feel I like what you see. You write 'em I'll touch them... It's really nice to see... Lucky me... [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 10-04-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
a raindrop, oh, for lucky me! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
You surely will girl  Great writings Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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