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good morning Daddy |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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a burning sun rose out of an eastern sea though it was winter a still warmed parts tenderly an early snow came thick reminding emotion I was sick with flu but left it alone as a passing notion the morning faced sky with you while cool winds formed tears in eyes corner another days dawning leaving a yesterdaz sigh wiping away moments bleu there in a blur I searched for worn sultry shoe & while in foggy haze I thought of me & you and O what a time we've traveled o’er daz vanishing hue and arresting the thoughts we need construed O yes dear what a time it’s been indeed I thanked again my God for time in loving you. If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley) [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 10-03-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Another lucky glimpse for me, of true love written, most eloquently....sigh...you guys should bottle this stuff....wonderful. an elixir of words, lucky you, lucky her...to have found each other. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Serenity... Your so sweet for noticing... thank you. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Beautifully written and I enjoyed this. Very touchng!  Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Lucky - a lovely set of sentiments, and a terrific presentation. It isn't easy to do this, but you make it look like it is. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Lucky...you write the love in your heart so beautifully...it always touches me with tender. |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Oh, honey, this is so beautiful and filled with love! I love your tender love, and I love you from the depths of my heart! You are my hero, and I'll always be so grateful that God brought us together way back when. Your wife, Rosemary < !signature--> The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G. [This message has been edited by Rosemary J. Gwaltney (edited 10-03-2000).] |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
WOW! This is truly beautiful and from the heart...an excellent show of love and affection. < !signature--> My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber. [This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 10-03-2000).] |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
sounds like TWO lucky people lucky ~S~ - nothing i can say that hasn't been said ~S~ |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Saunni, I'm so touched I never expected to hear much. LngJhnAg, Rosemary watches me do this every day and is ever amazed I how I do it so easily and prolifically quick. many thanks. Martie, you touch me with your tenderness too. much love... Rosemary, what can say to a love so dear. Temptress, well I might not say your a babe but your certianly a dear... and oh by the way we don't need a room we got an RV, Lucky me. ha, ha, he, heee, he. Wilfred, your so uniforn in style I'm surprised you took a gander. nice compliment coming from one as prolific yourself. Thanks much everyone. If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Lucky~ What beautiful and tender writings, thanks for a most enjoyable read Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ Such a tender emotion you portray - 'another days dawning leaving a yesterdaz sigh wiping away moments bleu' This lady always enjoys bumping into one sighed by you. *Hello to Rosemary Love ya' both - ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
I must say thank you to you all, and a special thanks to Balladeer for some finer tips in the forum. Nice to see you Marge... |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
tracy, Sorry, I didn't really miss your reply I just couldn't find the page. You know sometimes it's here and other times it's not. Kind of like my head. Thank you..! |
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