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child in the darkness |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief 
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I can’t be the things you see. I can’t feel those things you see. I don’t know the words that left you, by my side. Lightning is in the house tonight. Lay to rest your sins tonight. Living by the faults you bare, within my soul. All of this seems so strange to me. After all this what is left of me? And if I lose my mind are you there inside? Mother, I’ve got things on you. Makes me sick when I think of you. Man I’m lossing it all and,you let me go. Daddy, did I do something wrong? Damn I know I must have been wrong. Don’t leave me here daddy. Don’t say goodbye to me. [This message has been edited by Effigy (edited 10-03-2000).] |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Effigy, Wow. A very powerful poem.. I pray this isn't based on reality... if it is I offer you warm hugs. ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Effigy~ this reads like a song and it's a very sad one.......  -SEA |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
No worries this is just make believe. Thanks for your post. |
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