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Sunnyone
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0 posted 2000-10-03 12:01 PM



She sat at home alone, and watched the show on her tv...
Her children were all grown and it was down to he and she...
Her life was one-half gone, but she expected something more...
Now all she had was laundry, dirty dishes, dirty floor...
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She’d always been a dreamer, used to daydream all the time...
And when she closed her eyes at night, her dreams were so sublime...
No matter how it seemed these days, as bad had turned to worst...
There lived within her very soul, that old familiar thirst...
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A thirst to see new faces, and new places she could go...
To feel excited one more time, so that her heart would know...
That she was still alive inside, and needed just to fly...
To spread her wings, and set out for a dreamer’s clear blue sky...
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She’d fly to lands beyond her world, and chores of everyday...
She’d fly to where the sky stayed blue, and never turned to grey...
She’d fly to where that special one would open her heart’s door...
And then they’d fly away, on wings of love, forevermore...
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It is said that if a dream is deep inside of you...
That all the magic you possess, can make that dream come true...
There came a day when she was gone, and no one knew just why...
But some believe that faeries came, and taught her how to fly...
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So, if you are a dreamer, listen to your longing heart...
It will tell you what to do, and show you when to start...
Just don’t let go, keep holding on to what you know is right...
Someday your dreams, on faerie wings,
Will lift you into flight...

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Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
    'the Present'!




[This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 10-03-2000).]

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2000-10-03 12:24 PM


This is officially now my favorite of all that you've penned...and you've penned so many lovely ones...

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


catalinamoon
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2 posted 2000-10-03 12:46 PM


YES YES! this is me getting on the plane Saturday morning. Awesome Sunny, you did it again.
Sandra

Sunnyone
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3 posted 2000-10-03 03:20 PM


~~ Sunshine ~~
I am so glad that you enjoyed this one. It adds a bit of fancy to the everyday life of a housewife.  All housewives should be allowed to fly, just once!!
          Thank you!!


~~ Sandra ~~
I actually wrote this one for you!! I have been thinking about you lately, but have been unable to email.  I really am glad that this attracted your eye today!!
         Don't stop dreaming, my friend!!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2000-10-03 05:24 PM


okay then so where is MY poem.....huh????LOL  This was wonderful Sunny.  I do believe I am a dreamer too but I also know that in time I will have my dreams in my hands as I do not sit back and let them linger.  I dream them into reality.  Excellent write my friend.
SEA
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5 posted 2000-10-03 07:04 PM


Sunny1~ this is wonderful, I too am a dreamer...maybe I'll get a visit from some faeries who will teach me to fly......   -SEA
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
6 posted 2000-10-03 08:56 PM


Did you know that you could fly to the top of the forum's when you dream????  See here ya go!!!!!
SpitFire
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7 posted 2000-10-03 09:02 PM


~Hooray!!! Sunny,...this is spectacular! Absolutely. 100%. The wording, the flow, the mood and feel,...mmm. Very cool work. Take care of yourself. *Peace.
Sunnyone
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8 posted 2000-10-03 10:34 PM


Mark...
       Yes, my friend, you are one of the best dreamers I know, as you do so well putting them into words. Once in written form, they become reality. I so enjoy your work.   Also...thank you for flying me to the top!!


SEA...
       You can fly if you really want to!! Be on the lookout for the faerie wings......
     and never stop dreaming!!!
           (Thank you!!)


Spitfire...  
           I enjoy seeing you whenever you stop in to visit!!!  Thank you for coming here to read and for all the nice comments!~!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
9 posted 2000-10-03 11:18 PM


Sunny, thanks for thinking of me here. I am going for it, and all your good wishes have stood at  my side, through it all. Thank you so much.
Sandra

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10 posted 2000-10-03 11:31 PM


Beautiful Sunny... I consider myself a dreamer... I daydream all the time literally... and it's a beautiful dream poem... nicely done!  

~Artistic~

"Dreams are the touchstones of our characters"
-Henry David Thoreau



snowpants
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11 posted 2000-10-03 11:57 PM


This is so wonderfully encouraging!  I loved it!!  Thanks for sharing it with us!!

sp  


Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier

Sunnyone
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12 posted 2000-10-04 01:53 AM


~~ cat ~~
I am so happy for you, and I know that all will work out well!! As far as standing by your side, you don't have to thank me, as that's what friends are for!!
Stay happy, my good friend!!

~~ Artistic ~~
There's nothing wrong with daydreaming! Some of the most inventive people in the world are great daydreamers!   So, enjoy.....and I'm really glad you stopped by for this!

~~ snowpants ~~
That's good!!  I meant it to encourage the dreamer in whomever read it      

tracie66
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13 posted 2000-10-04 03:13 AM


It is said that if a dream is deep inside of you...
That all the magic you possess, can make that dream come true...
There came a day when she was gone, and no one knew just why...
But some believe that faeries came, and taught her how to fly...

Sunny this is oh soo beautiful and I just adore any poem about fairies  
Wonderful read  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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