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Long John and Balladeer's Halloween
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Long John and Balladeer's Halloween |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois 
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Dressed up for Halloween Sat upon the doorstep They were feelin' kinda mean They sat real still and quiet Waiting for the kids approach For the Halloween effect Let loose a few good roach Cobwebs hung in corners And the roaches scurried 'bout Somewhere in the dark of night You could hear the treaters shout With eerie music playing And a cold chill in the air Both were real excited To give the kids a scare The sound of leaves were crunching As the kids rounded the bend A little pair of goblins Together on the stairs ascend They're heading for the doorbell When something caught their eyes It was Balladeer and Long John In their costumes in disguise They heard the softened whimpers Of these two as they did cry Both the little goblins In concern had asked them why They asked of the two men Why it was that they did cry They said, "In our excitment We didn't manage to stay dry. We were so excited To give you such a scare But it all just overcame us And we wet our underwear." The goblins started laughing As the two in shame sat there As echos rang into the night "THEY WET THEIR UNDERWEAR!"  [This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 10-03-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh you kids are good! ROTFLMAO< !signature--> Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 10-03-2000).] |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
uhhh, Rebecca? Hvae you not learned to not kick a skunk? I enjoyed this poem, and I even chortled a bit, but I WILL NOT TOLERATE THESE ASSAULTS ON MY DIGNIFIED CHARACTER!!!! Naturally, a suitable rebuttal will be forthcoming. How do you feel about being characterized as a VIXEN AND SHAMELESS HUSSY???? hmmm??? I just gotta know before I get started on the epic poem about lil WHTDOVE!!! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
LJ assault you? me? never  You mean you're gonna give me character? Woohoo  |
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susanbartee Member
since 2000-08-15
Posts 119Channelview, TX USA |
WhtDove...this was so funny. I'm sure Balladeer and Long John can't wait to respond to this one. I'll be watching. Great job!!! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Whtdove, tag you're it you pick up the baton and run with it I loved this poem it was hoot but as for wet underwear I think the point's moot the way they would scare those kid's in their bed was if they're wearing underwear on their head. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
HA HA HA As men get older they tend to act younger. Now we see that Balladeer & LngJhn have regressed to baby stage. That was very entertaining WhtDove. Keep us updated on the "children". |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Rebecca~ this is GREAT!!!ROFLMAO!! Excellent and loads of fun.  -SEA |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
ROFL  Very funny, Rebecca!!Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
SusanB. I tell ya what, you watch and I'll run for cover ok? Thanks!Kethry, I was going to go for the pulling off of the mask thing, but hey, I had to get em both. Thanks!LOL inot2B...good one! I shall try, don't know how long this Muse will hold. I tell ya I don't know what came over me, it just happened. LOL SEA thanks girl! Glad you had fun, cause I had a laughing riot while writing it. Oh the thought that were running through the mind. LOL Thanks D! ~Hugs~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
WhtDove- ROFLMAO!!! This is too funny! I love it. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Glad you got a laugh Vicky! Thank you! Ok, is Deer to scared? Is he too ashamed to come out of his corner? Where are ya buddy?? Or are ya still chasin them goblins? |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Top notch WhtDove! Top notch indeed!  Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. JP Most people would rather die than think; in fact, they do so. B. Russell |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is great! Kathleen |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
And now we know why they invented "Depends"....another thing to pass out this year along with the candy apples and popcorn balls. ROFLMBO....Excellent....TOUCHE' |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
White Dove, you've written a long one It seems like that it never ends We'd better buy Ballad and Long John A box of those trusty "Depends" (Nice one by the way) |
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