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The winking of a star
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The winking of a star |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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 When you wish upon a star Your wish will travel very far Through the clouds in the darkened sky Over the moon way up high Past millions of stars winking with glee For a wish they long to hear and see When it reaches the brightest in the sky It hears your wish and sends a reply Watch it closely and you will see That it winks for you so happily For wishes to grant and hopes to apply For those who reach out to her in the sky Send your hopes and wishes to the stars The most brightest star winking by far She will catch it, bless it send it down To float it's way gently to the ground To ride upon your back as fate No time, No place just hope and faith Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Tracie66, this is wonderful be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Thanks hon You to  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is one I save to read to my newest favorite poet---my daughter...I just know she's going to love it as much as I did...(her first word, was not Mama, or Da Da, but MOON...LOL) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Past millions of stars winking with glee For a wish they long to hear and see When it reaches the brightest in the sky It hears your wish and sends a reply Watch it closely and you will see That it winks for you so happily For wishes to grant and hopes to apply For those who reach out to her in the sky Now these are some sweet lines my friend. What wonderful visions you leave us with. Beautiful verse in all accounts. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW serenity what a lovely reply and compliment...thanks hon I hope she does enjoy it  wonderful to know we have another fine poet emerging  Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dearest Mark You snuck in while I was searching the stars, you sneaky fellow Thanks Mark for such a lovely reply Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Well now ... don't you just shine in this piece !  Love it ... love you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Some wonderful thoughts Tracie I have a wishing well and the water collects your starlight ... so I can sprinkle it through my garden of hopes [This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 10-03-2000).] |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
Tracie, it's good to see your work again. Nice poem! I liked it unfortunately my wishes haven't come true quite yet There's a difference between knowing a path and walking that path.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you do some pretty snazzy twinkling of your own here sweet poet... seeing ya here makes me smile... so nice to find a post from ya this morn later-wish-on-a-star-gator jm |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
 Marge~ Yep feel like shining Glad you liked Love Tracie~ Oh Rex I hope it catches my starlight forever and that you have a garden full of neverending hopes and dreams Love Tracie~ Hey LP~ Thanks for your lovely comments Your dreams will come true one day Tracie~ Sweet Janny You're making me smile on this beautiful night Thanks for a lovely reply which is always appreciated Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Not sneaking.....HELLLLLLLOOOOOO can you hear me?????? Just wanted to make sure not to frighten you Thought I would come back for one more winking of a star. |
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eyesplus2 Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 163australia |
What a wonderful poem. Wishes are like the stars in the sky...never ending. Thankyou for sharing it with us. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
A star for every wish my friend. . . Simply wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Mark~ Your welcome back anytime my friend Tracie~ eyesplus2~ I'm so glad you liked..thanks for your lovely reply Tracie~ Hello Sven~ Thanks for your lovely comments as always Bye Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
It seems that you and I have a thing for stars.... or at least I do anyway! I so much enjoyed reading this piece.... May many stars wink upon you!  ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Tracie, I love this one!!! So full of hope. Just so you know, I am wishing tonight. Beautiful writing, my friend. HUGS, Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
A perfect night under the harvest moon to make that wish too Beautiful work Tracie~ |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
I love this one Tracie. In fact I'm going to toss my wish out and watch for the wink! Great poem. |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Thanks Tracie, I love your inspiration, I will also be searching for that winking star tonight. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Hiya Tracie, I must add my two bitz in here and let you know I adore this 'sweetie' you've penned! Coco |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Irie Thanks for the many winks...I do have a thing for stars, I guess I got that from my dad, he still love's to search the sky and watch the stars. Thanks for your lovely response Tracie~ Hello hon did you get a wink last night, I hope so nice to see you here...hope to catch you soon on icq Tracie~ Butterflies Thanks sweetie for your kind response Love Tracie~ Eloise~ Did you get your wink?? I bet you did Tracie~ Gemini~ WOW!!! inspiration hey...thanks two winks for you Tracie~ Coco~ Thanks for a most delightful reply...glad you liked Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
HEY!!!!!! Why didn't I get a star?????LOL Still love this one my friend. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Ooops actually I looked back and thought just that Mark sorry hon Here it is Kethry serenity Rex LP Janny eyesplus Sven That's better isn't it Luv ya all Tracie~ < !signature--> Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 10-12-2000).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
never realized that a wish upon a star, that this wish have to travel very far. loved it, and everytime that I wish upon a star, it will remind me on this little nice poem. Charisma |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Charisma~ Send your hopes and wishes to the stars The most brightest star winking by far She will catch it, bless it send it down To float it's way gently to the ground To ride upon your back as fate No time, No place just hope and faith The wish will take a ride with you until the time is right....happy wishing Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Perfect poem for us star gazing poets. Beautifully written poem, and the bottom line is Faith Well, done, fellow dreamer of dreams Liz |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Liz~ Thanks hon for stopping bye with such lovely comments, I appreciate it Yes faith, means so much doesn't it Love Tracie~< !signature--> Oops sorry sweetie here's you star Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 10-15-2000).] |
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