navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #10 » Name That Tune
Open Poetry #10
Post A Reply Post New Topic Name That Tune Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
eyesplus2
Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 163
australia

0 posted 2000-10-03 01:36 AM



It starts as a rhythm of joys shared.........
It has a longing echo of sadness' endured........

It has a joyful chorus that brings a smile to all who hear..........
It has a backbeat of hopes and dreams come true.........

It's words are easy for they are written on your heart........
It's tune is catchy for it draws you in for all eternity........

It is a song that all know by heart....for it is deep in side our soul......
The songs name.....you know it I'm sure.....for its on your lips from the day you were born....

Love is the tune that I sing ..... all for you.......


© Copyright 2000 eyesplus2 - All Rights Reserved
weaubleau
Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 101
MO
1 posted 2000-10-03 01:50 AM


i know this tune so well...

it's a sweet, sweet song, isn't it?

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 2000-10-03 09:57 AM


I enjoyed this one! This is uniquely beautiful!  

Love, the song that knows no boundaries, it's a universal language.

SEA
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
3 posted 2000-10-03 11:09 AM


Eyesplus2~ this is really very beautiful.   -SEA
Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2000-10-03 10:23 PM


And what a lovely song it is Eyes! You captured so many of the beautiful aspects, nicely done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
5 posted 2000-10-03 10:35 PM


OH Eyes...so lovely...I wish I could hear this song
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
6 posted 2000-10-04 03:36 PM


eyesplus2
I love this song....couldn't quite think of the tune though.
Be well
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #10 » Name That Tune

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary