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ggrn3
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0 posted 2000-10-02 11:23 PM


The Wedding Poem
By
Garfield Green

It has been four years
That we have shared together
You have shown me how to cry
And how to enjoy simple pleasures.

    You are a strong young lady
    And when push comes to shov'
    I know you will be there for me
    And I should hold onto your love.

Darling you have given your heart to me
Which I will treasure and hold dear
I wish to return this gift
To show my love is sincere.

    You are so special to me
    And I do love you so
    I want to hold you in my arms forever
    And never let go.

You are the lady of my life
And it is you I adore
I want you for my wife
And so very much more.

    I want to love you forever
    Commit only to you
    And nothing will mean more to me
    Than the moment I say "I DO."



Garfield

© Copyright 2000 Garfield Green III - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
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1 posted 2000-10-02 11:34 PM


Sigh...lovely sir simply lovely
Tears_of_Grace
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2 posted 2000-10-02 11:41 PM


A lovely show of your heart and a expression of your love.  This is a fine display of poetry with heart and soul poured into every line.
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3 posted 2000-10-02 11:47 PM


Garfield~ this IS romantic, I held my heart while reading and gave a *SIGH*   -SEA
Wesley the Blue
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4 posted 2000-10-02 11:48 PM


This is awsome.  I know this kind of love and it is truely wonderful.  Congratulations.

Keith W. Mullin

Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you.


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5 posted 2000-10-03 12:16 PM


ggrn3,

   ~sighs~ Awwwwwwwww!!!! So sweet and so romantic.  ~sighs some more~

~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

ggrn3
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6 posted 2000-10-03 12:18 PM


Paula, Thank you

Tears, Thank you

SEA, Thank you

Keith, Thank you

Rosepetals, Thank you

Thank you all for stopping by to read and you delightful comments.  It's just so nice when you find the one in your dreams and then you get to marry her on top of it all.< !signature-->

Garfield

[This message has been edited by ggrn3 (edited 10-03-2000).]

dgvarner
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7 posted 2000-10-23 03:25 AM


very sweet gar....i'd say shes a lucky love    

this is written with such emotion and truth...

best wishes to you and your love  

hugs, dg


my soul is painted like the wings of butterflies...fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die...i can fly--my friends -Queen

Sunnyone
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8 posted 2000-10-23 03:43 AM


She's a very lucky lady, and as long as you write her beautiful poems like this, you'll have her heart forever!!  


Follow your dream!


ggrn3
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9 posted 2000-10-23 09:26 PM


dgvarner
  Thank you for your delightful comments

Sunny1
  Thank you for your delightful comments also.  Thanks for stopping by to brighten my day.

Garfield

Butterflies_dont_cry
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10 posted 2000-10-23 09:33 PM


Wow...how have I missed this...fantastic work, you spoke from your heart here G and it shows so lovingly~
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