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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2000-10-02 11:18 PM


and then i kissed her
and the world fell into place.
of course, she's no longer here,
but i can imagine her face.


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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2000-10-02 11:28 PM


Mike~ You are melting my heart. This is gorgeous.   -SEA
rosepetals25
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2 posted 2000-10-02 11:38 PM


bsquirrel,

     You say so much with so few words.

~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

ggrn3
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3 posted 2000-10-02 11:43 PM


So simple yet so much said.

Garfield

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4 posted 2000-10-03 01:03 AM


I am speechless.  Without words.  Nothing. Zip.  Nada.  Null and Void.  Oh...dem was woids?  Well then, since I've screwed it up anyway, let me just add, exquisite!!!
dgvarner
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5 posted 2000-10-23 03:29 AM


simplicity often says so very much....

hugs, dg


my soul is painted like the wings of butterflies...fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die...i can fly--my friends -Queen

Paula Finn
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6 posted 2000-10-23 09:47 AM


Heartbreaking
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