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SEA
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0 posted 2000-10-02 10:29 PM



Not Yet
Not Now
Don't go
No one told me how

How am I supposed
to say good-bye
the words won't come
I can only cry

Cry my heart out
I'm so afraid of losing you
Don't go.....
I love you Aunt Sue.

-SEA-

* my Aunt is on life support and it doesn't look good for her. My heart is breaking...........

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ma miller
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1 posted 2000-10-02 10:35 PM


SEA ... my thoughts and prayers go out to your Aunt and to you, in hopes that your writing gives you the answers to your questions ...

[This message has been edited by MA Miller (edited 10-02-2000).]

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2 posted 2000-10-02 10:46 PM


Sea, I will keep you and your family in my prayers.
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3 posted 2000-10-02 11:01 PM


MA Miller~ thank you, this is really hard for me....I feel lost and helpless.

Poet~thank you, that means the world to me.

-SEA

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4 posted 2000-10-02 11:56 PM


How To Say Goodbye

I don't know how to say goodbye
something I thought I'd never have to do-
figured I'd be a permanent fixture
always, in some way, live life with you.

But on the other hand, deep down I knew
that it would all have to end someday-
I was sure it would be for my dying
didn't think it could end any other way.

I'm not sure how to live without you
how to deal with a loss that great-
and go on with life, full and happy
with things I want before too late.

But all I want now is to stay
here with you until the day I die-
I'd never remember how to cry,
I'd never forget how to fly,
and I'd never have to learn
how to say goodbye.


SEA, my prayers are with you.

SEA
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5 posted 2000-10-03 12:01 PM


Passing Shadows~ with tears flowing, I thank you with all my heart. -Susan
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6 posted 2000-10-03 12:13 PM


SEA,
  
   Big big warm hugs to you. I will also keep you and your family in my thoughts.

And passing shadows.. that is simply beautiful poem... it has brought tears to my eyes also.




~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

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7 posted 2000-10-03 07:43 AM


My prayers are with you as well.  Take care of you during all this.  Sorry to hear of this agonizing time.
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8 posted 2000-10-03 07:56 AM


Dear SEA
my thoughts are with you and your aunt, your poem read with sorrow ~HUGS~ little one
Love tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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9 posted 2000-10-03 08:46 AM


sorry sweetie ...add my name to the list
of thoughts and prayers for you and your family in this difficult time.
let your poetry help you work thru it and
find your strength and healing
take care sweet Sea-gator
jm

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10 posted 2000-10-03 09:17 AM


RP~ thank you for the hugs  

Mark~ thank you, I need all the prayers I can get for my Aunt~ she is an amazing woman  

Tracie~ thank you for the hugs too  

Janet~ thanks, it means so much to me to have such wonderful people in my life.  

-SEA

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11 posted 2000-10-03 09:23 AM


SEA: I'm so sorry... My prayers are with you and your family that you will have strength to face whatever the outcome.

And Shadows... The poem is lovely... the compassion behind posting it is beautiful! *S*

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12 posted 2000-10-03 09:28 AM


Sweetheart, I am so glad you came here to share this...my prayers are with you and your aunt...

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


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13 posted 2000-10-03 09:30 AM


Suthern~ thank you...I'm trying to be strong, that's always how my Aunt wanted me to be. I love her so much....thank you for thinking of me.   -SEA
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14 posted 2000-10-03 09:32 AM


Sunshine~ this is the only place I feel safe enough to bring these feelings to. thank you very much.   -SEA
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15 posted 2000-10-03 02:13 PM


am glad you have us that you can let go too...this is a true expression of love and human frailty....hugs and hopes and prayers your way  
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16 posted 2000-10-03 02:23 PM


SEA...my prayers are with you and your family.  It is so hard to let go of the ones you love.  
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17 posted 2000-10-31 06:16 PM


Liked it
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18 posted 2000-10-31 06:23 PM


SEA, this is simply beautiful and heart-wrenching    My thoughts and prayers are with you and yours too, hugs, Pepper

Pepper
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19 posted 2000-10-31 07:53 PM


SEA, oh love! I'm so sorry to hear this, it must be agonising for you to deal with this. I'll pray for you, and light a candle, and I promise you will be in my thoughts.
Take care
             Mushy Marsha
Remember, at this time it is also important for you to take care of yourself so please take care of yourself too.
Warm hugs love.                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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20 posted 2000-10-31 07:56 PM


SEA, beautiful write love, absolutely perfect. You'd think I could remember what I wanted to say wouldn't you. Now isn't it good that they don't leave feeding the patients to me, they'd all be sending out for food. Head like a sieve sorry love.
             Mushy Marsha


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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21 posted 2000-10-31 08:13 PM


I would gladly give up some of my time for hers. (If God is listening, let's deal.)
As for you Sea, I wish I could brighten this. My heart goes out. Take care of yourself.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

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