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Dawn Eclipse
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since 2000-01-31
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The Horsehead Nebula

0 posted 2000-10-02 09:47 PM



Heat and fire
Hearts desire
Life of pain
Lived in vain.

Flowers wilting
Times are shifting
Dreams uplifting
Souls are drifting

Rock and stone
From hell’s thrown
Misery shown
Chances blown

Society cries
A child dies
Evil’s rise,
Loves demise.


"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*


© Copyright 2000 Cassandra Roseen - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
1 posted 2000-10-02 10:16 PM


This is very powerful and concise Cassers. Probably one of the best things I've ever read from you...flowed wonderfully, the short words gave it a good and harsh feeling, which went very well with the topic.  Very well done my friend!  

*Krista Knutson*

"Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious

Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA
2 posted 2000-10-02 10:31 PM


Dude, Cassers, your pretty good at this.  Stick with it, things will get better.

Keith W. Mullin

Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you.


Waverly917
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since 2000-09-23
Posts 90
Hugo, MN
3 posted 2000-10-02 11:45 PM


Oh Cassers dear!  That was a wonderful poem.  Hope things get better.

Abra

ggrn3
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since 2000-08-17
Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.
4 posted 2000-10-03 12:05 PM


Dawn
This just flowed and definitely went with the title of this gem. I loved it even though it ended kinda sadly.


Garfield

Dawn Eclipse
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since 2000-01-31
Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula
5 posted 2000-10-03 10:14 PM


Krista~  Thanks!  I really take great pride in what you say.  thanks a mil.  

Keith~  Thanks.  If yah hadn't told me to, I probably wouldn't have written anything at all.  

Abra~thanks for your reply.. it means a lot.     I think this are getting better.

ggrn3~  thank you for your kind words.  they mean a lot to me.  

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*


Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
6 posted 2001-08-04 09:06 PM



A very powerful outpouring~

Melissa~

Secret Whisper
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since 2001-01-25
Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass
7 posted 2001-08-20 01:31 AM


Cassie, how very emotionally charged. Truly a wonderful write. Very elloquent.

~Alice~

"We also know how cruel the truth often is, and we wonder whether delusion is not more consoling."- Henri Poincare (1854-1912)

passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2003-01-27 09:45 AM


very powerful! I fully enjoyed!
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