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Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind


0 posted 10-02-2000 09:07 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Greeneyes

    He wants to
    walk hand and hand
    on the shore, while I read
    poetry from the soul

    Make love under moonlit shoreline,
    while gypsy wind frolics
    in the waves, and he frolics
    with sweet taboo

    Calls me lover when
    the night winds blow
    and the skies thunder
    with the onset of rolling storms,
    his storm horizons
    sleep inside my mind,
    sleeps inside where he

    Gently speaks how emeralds
    captivate his stare,
    as the moon glows it's
    sparkle of shimmer

    Would whisper how lovely
    I look when he calls my name,
    and weaves my thoughts
    with his mind, weaves
    my thoughts with his
    hands, weaves his
    thoughts with my

    desire
© Copyright 2000 Lauren~ - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-02-2000 09:13 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautiful, Greeneyes!! Just lovely!!

Denise
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2 posted 10-02-2000 09:13 PM       View Profile for snowpants   Email snowpants   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit snowpants's Home Page   View IP for snowpants

"Gently speaks how emeralds
    captivate his stare,"

That was great!  I especially love it because the beach has to be my absolute favorite place!  Great write!!

sp  


Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier
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Calls me lover when
    the night winds blow
    and the skies thunder
    with the onset of rolling storms,
    his storm horizons
    sleep inside my mind,
    sleeps inside where he

    Gently speaks how emeralds
    captivate his stare,
    as the moon glows it's
    sparkle of shimmer
==================
this is STUNNING!!!
what a gorgeous poem...
such sensual emotions laced with such mystical imagery ..
this is a VERY well written poem ..
its a feast for the readers senses ...
very very creative work..
your unique vocabulary choices made this gem.
excellent work green eyes...
take care
jm


There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~

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4 posted 10-02-2000 11:13 PM       View Profile for Wilfred Yeats   Email Wilfred Yeats   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Wilfred Yeats's Home Page   View IP for Wilfred Yeats

You've done it again - I know how hard you work to craft these gems - (think it deserves a better title tho')
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5 posted 10-02-2000 11:25 PM       View Profile for Tears_of_Grace   Email Tears_of_Grace   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tears_of_Grace

The power of the weave, a beautiful poem, you wove a fine poem yourself!
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Greeneyes
  You have woven the best blanket here with the finest of thread.  Great write.  I liked that way you did a 90 degree during the last verse from him weaving all of you,  to you weaving him with your desire.
Hey, I like Emeralds too. (slyishly typing this)

Garfield
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Greeneyes,

    I can only say beautiful beautiful writing  

~~Tara aka rp25 :o)
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8 posted 10-04-2000 03:46 AM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark Bohannan

Well it is the ones that inspire us that actually weave the poem within our mind so our muse may take advantage of it.  Wonderful write.
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9 posted 10-04-2000 03:49 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Oh this is written with such beautiful imagery...well done
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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10 posted 10-04-2000 01:32 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

grrrrrrrrrr........I had a single response for all that responded, my computers does not like me today    but for all,  please know really how much I appreciate your responses and reading....I kindly thank you  

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11 posted 10-04-2000 01:33 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

ooooops

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-04-2000).]
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Green Eyes--What a delightful poem..."gypsy winds frolic"..."emeralds captivate his stare"...and I loved the last stanza...beautifully done!
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13 posted 10-04-2000 08:33 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

Martie

I appreciate you letting me know you enjoyed, thank you so much....

GE
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14 posted 10-04-2000 09:13 PM       View Profile for fool   Email fool   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fool

this has such a gentle flow to it,
I really enjoyed the feel of it.

"    Would whisper how lovely
                                                I look when he calls my name,
                                                  and weaves my thoughts
                                                   with his mind, weaves
                                                    my thoughts with his
                                                     hands, weaves his
                                                     thoughts with my "

And this last stanza is just superb.
Greeneyes
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15 posted 10-05-2000 02:20 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

fool--

I am most thankful you enjoyed, and for your kind response~

GE
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Listening to every heart


16 posted 10-05-2000 09:38 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

I'm so glad I came in and caught this one...I too have green eyes, so it took on special meaning...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ


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18 posted 08-30-2009 04:02 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Ah one I missed, and it would have been my loss.
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