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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-10-02 04:27 PM


Stringing Haikus

on a string of love
of nature and animals
unfolds a story

if you care not for
crickets and other bugs then
perhaps you should leave

on dark summer night
cricket chirped a song of love
into shadows deep

he, true, persisted
until she could not resist
to his charms she flew

song of loving sweet
they sung until the wee morn
~ a family was born ~

cool weather overhead
calmed the crickets chirping song
winter came to claim

love of summer night
‘tho summer’s song died it’s true
‘twill rush forth in spring




Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


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1 posted 2000-10-02 07:08 PM


waiting for last song
summer's final performance
strings of joy tonight

Excellent my friend. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Denise
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2 posted 2000-10-02 09:05 PM


Very beautiful expression, Karilea!

Denise

Mark Bohannan
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3 posted 2000-10-02 09:06 PM


Til spring we shall wait
with song of crickets in heart
and visions of dreams

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4 posted 2000-10-03 06:48 PM


Sunshine,

    I like I like Very well done!

Again spring will arrive
The cricket will proudly sing
Their melodic song



~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

Sunshine
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5 posted 2000-10-04 04:24 PM


You all are way too nice...and I like it, I like it...!!!  Thank you all...

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


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