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vandana
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0 posted 2000-10-02 11:46 AM



Each word
I tried to say,
It is true,
Believe what I say to you,
Yes,
I love you deeply,
Will love you forever,
Each word I say,
It comes from my heart,
Each word I say,
It's true,
Every word
And every single beat of mt heart,
Is beating fast,
Every time I tried to say,
Each word to you,
Each word I say,
It's true,
Every word and every single
Beat of my heart,
Is beating fast,
As the years past,
And still I tried to say,
each word to you,
You don't believe what I say
You say it's not true,
But It's true
What I say,
It comes from my heart,
And I truely love you
Will love  you forever,

© Copyright 2000 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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1 posted 2000-10-02 12:03 PM


~~~ vandana ~~~
I so enjoy reading your poems! They are full of love and tender feelings....they awaken a sense of joy in this old heart....thank you for that!!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



JamesMichael
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2 posted 2000-10-02 03:23 PM


Vandana I always believe your soft and sincere words...perhaps the other person doesn't know how to trust...James
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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3 posted 2000-10-02 03:45 PM


Vandana,
Great write, great sentiment.
Be well
Kethry.


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Sven
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4 posted 2000-10-02 07:11 PM


vandana. . .

each word from your heart
is like a drop of rain
giving joy to a heart
in need of life. . .

wonderful my friend. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Denise
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5 posted 2000-10-02 09:27 PM


Lovely thoughts, as always, Vandana!!

Denise

vandana
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6 posted 2000-10-09 06:47 PM


THANK YOU ALL!!!!!!
Wilfred Yeats
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7 posted 2000-10-09 06:59 PM


your exposed heart - your honesty, your love - come through very clearly
vandana
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8 posted 2000-10-24 07:12 PM


Thank yo,Welfred Yeats.
Daniel J D
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Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
9 posted 2000-10-24 07:32 PM


Vandana,
So much truth and honesty here. Loud applause for a truly beautiful poem.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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