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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2000-10-02 11:03 AM

The First Suprise

Conviction dropped exploding pride
No nonsense and nothing to hide.
And we sat there frozen in surprise
With open mouths and misty eyes.

Center stage, podium and chair
A voice rang out in full declare.
High pitch it flew and hit the walls
And landed like a water falls.

Wonder on wonder vocalized
Each sound brought more and more sunrise.
Each sentence thundered to the rear
And nothing else was there to hear.

It came right from the center stage
The awesome part was size and age.
The speaker all of three foot bold
And only all of three years old.

He chinned his little violin
And played like he was Menuhin.

jinxed
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since 2000-09-27

Posts 86

1 posted 2000-10-02 11:07 AM

oh my gosh this is precious...the poem the vision you share with us....thank you for sharing...i love this, very well composed

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2000-10-02 11:16 AM

and the second surprise was this lovely gift of remembrance from you...giving all something to look forward to...

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

3 posted 2000-10-02 11:32 AM

What a wonderful tribute to a very young musician!! Splendid!!

Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

4 posted 2000-10-02 12:15 PM

Yes such a sweet surprise...I remember that day well...hehehe

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2000-10-02 02:02 PM

Oh yes, this is lovely. I enjoyed this one very, very much.

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

6 posted 2000-10-02 02:32 PM

This poem is so very dear
With a sweet surprise at the end
I loved it
Liz

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2000-10-02 05:33 PM

Jinxed, Sunshine, Sunny1, Paula, Irish and Elizabeth, I thank you all, having trouble with my line Will thank you all again. Sy

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