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The Reflections |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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The Reflections Inner and outer there are two one is for me one is for you time to pick up that mirror again look to tomorrow, think back on when reflect on future’s reactions see if there’s a past connection what do I see, looking at me beyond eyebrows and lashes and freckles past green orbs of wrinkled, lined eyes see past the laughter, past the spectacles am I going to be then so surprised? This special mirror looks into the heart for all of the good I do, it stays torn apart always deciding between right and wrong sometimes needing a quick kick-start all of the hopes and dreams are still there even with mileage, no need of repair wisdom, however, has laid wider tracks and naïveté, it’s been set a bit back so why then can I still be surprised? Inner and outer there are two one is for me one is for you. 2 October 2000 ©Karilea Rilling Jungel [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 10-02-2000).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, what a true line... "Wisdom, however, has laid wider tracks" Sunshine....this was a great morning poem!!  Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 10-02-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You gotta release those hidden feelings somewhere and if poetry be it for now then we will all listen. Hope it helps to write it out some. Superb penning as I could feel your struggle. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Your words reflect your heart my friend. . . Excellent. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I enjoyed the ponderings of this one--- "reflect on future'e reactions see if there's a past connection..." spoke to me, ya did. Thanks so much. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Lovely, lovely ponder. 'time to pick up that mirror again look to tomorrow, think back on when' My friend ... you touch me with reflections !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You are all so kind, I hug you all...it means much when and if this touches someone, and it is shared back with me... thank you... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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