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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2000-10-02 07:07 AM


Longing for you to be close to me
to reach out and touch your femininity.
Desiring to please you whatever you ask of me
your desires will be my hearts decree.
Eagerly wanting your sweet kiss
and the softness of your warm caress.
Needing the moisture from your lips
and the gentleness within your fingertips.
Yearning to explore the mysteries of you.
The treasure in the hidden valley's
wanting to be discovered.
The pleasure in the mountain dew
waiting to be uncovered.

And now you are beside me
beckoning me to touch the beauty I see.
All the beauty that I see becomes the beauty
embracing and touching me.
A touch becomes an embrace
as sensual lips come face to face.
All the lovely beauty I have admired
now sensual pleasure to touch and acquire.
My lips feel the warmth of your kiss
as my fingers embrace silky feminine bliss.
We touch, we taste, we kiss, we embrace.
New lovers eye to eye and face to face.

Silky sensations to explore
sensual feelings begging for more.
Magic moments shared by you and I.
We allow not a wasted moment to pass us by.
Looking, touching and tasting every inch of beauty
within our shared embrace.
We reach together for more poignant pleasure.
Ernestly longing to discover the newfound beauty
of each other
found within the desires of these two lovers.

Jameslee@October02,2000
MinaandJames






[This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 10-03-2000).]

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Mark Bohannan
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1 posted 2000-10-02 07:33 AM


James, it is nice to see you so much in love and having it returned to you.  I have one word for you.........."HOT" my man "HOT"
Charisma
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2 posted 2000-10-02 10:28 AM


*sigh*.....wish that I was the woman in your poem.
my heart beat like crazy reading your words, so I can't deny that I like it.

Sunnyone
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3 posted 2000-10-02 10:42 AM



This is certainly a beautiful love poem, and so well done, that I am going to go back and read it again....and then again!! Love the erotic touches!!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



jinxed
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4 posted 2000-10-02 10:50 AM


wow this is so beautiful it almost hurts to read when you are all alone...sigh...great writing
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2000-10-02 03:27 PM


Thank you Mark, Charisma, Sunny and Jinxed for your lovely words.
Sunny thank you for that big beating heart..my heart beats like that when I'm with Mina...I feel so comfortable with her...James

Sven
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6 posted 2000-10-02 07:16 PM


James my friend. . . what can I say?  

Mina is one incredibly lucky woman. . . this poem is incredible!!  

You deserve it my friend. . . be happy. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


SEA
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with you
7 posted 2000-10-02 07:42 PM


James~ I just love this, not only is it totally hot but it is incredibly sweet. I'm happy for you, you sweet guy   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


JamesMichael
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8 posted 2000-10-06 04:42 PM


Thank you Sven and Sea..I am one incredibly blessed man...and I know it....James
Victoria
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9 posted 2000-10-06 04:50 PM


This is my favorite James..love it..
juliet_2u
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10 posted 2000-10-06 07:16 PM


Wow James this is one great poem. I am sooooooo happy for you. Love, love, sweet wonderful love. Looks good on ya my friend.
Juls

Paula Finn
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11 posted 2000-10-06 10:46 PM


James....you are such a special man you deserve all this and so much more.
JamesMichael
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12 posted 2000-10-07 04:19 PM


I appreciate your response Victoria, Juliet, and Paula...you are very nice...James
Gemini
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13 posted 2000-10-07 10:10 PM


James-Truely a passionate piece from your heart, I liked it very much.
Kit McCallum
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14 posted 2000-10-07 10:17 PM


It's so wonderful and refreshing to read the beautiful discoveries you find within your love James ... she is a fortunate woman to have captured your heart with such passion and promise. Beautifully written!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

JamesMichael
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15 posted 2000-10-09 03:36 PM


Thank you Gemini and Kit for the warm responses...James
passing shadows
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16 posted 2004-05-16 08:42 PM


wow! you wrote long stuff back in these days!
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