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eyesplus2
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since 2000-03-02
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0 posted 2000-10-02 02:10 AM



What is a dream........
One lover asked the other...........

The lover said... A dream is a wish...
Wrapped up in hopes.........
Tied with ribbons of desire.........

The other lover said......I give to you.......
A gift wrapped up in the hopes you have made come true......
A gift.....
Tied with the silken ribbons of the desires I have for you.......

I give this gift to you...this dream........
For you have made all my dreams come true.........

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vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
1 posted 2000-10-03 03:18 AM



eyesplus2-
this is very beautiful.  enjoyed it much.  

-vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2000-10-03 08:59 AM


Now this is one sweet conversation.  Lovely sentiments and purity.
Waverly917
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since 2000-09-23
Posts 90
Hugo, MN
3 posted 2000-10-04 04:30 PM


....sigh.... simply gorgeous.  

Abra

"So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains
And we never even know we have the key."
-Already Gone, The Eagles

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