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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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where do all the dead flowers go? where does all the melted snow flow? where does the sky define a crow? i don't know. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Um... My guess would be.. To dead flower heaven... South... Where ever the crow flies... Just my guesses, of course...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bsquirrel, I agree with Nan, enjoyed. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
BS~ hmmm it's too early in the morning to answer those questions...my guess would be also to dead flower heaven ...sorry i stole the answer hehe. great poem. take care. amy  "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
It's the questions that have no answers that give life it's little mysteries! This is food for thought, and ver enjoyable!!  Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi bsuirrel, So nice to see you, well the flowers fade in to a soul needing to remember, melting snow quenches a dry mouth wanting to tell his story, when the crow is seen by the naked eye and taken in as natures creation it is only then defined, I really don't know either but this is what my mind says today tomorrow it will change as so will I, so much enjoyed your poem. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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jinxed Member
since 2000-09-27
Posts 86 |
well 'twould only be guesses but in my memory lay the flowers vased and dried deadened by time in the new green shoots the snow melts life into the dead the sky need not define a crow... they are equally as free but you could just as well say I don't know either great read |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
You know, flowers don't die, they just fade away (heehee) I enjoyed the questions and I think most everyone would have a different answer for ya. I'm obviously no help at all.  -SEA |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i sure am glad nan sounds so much like ninny.. bsquirrel great little ditty bout jack and diane |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Wow, this sure took on a life of its own. Thanks for all the replies. Mike |
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