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In Candle Light
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In Candle Light |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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In Candlelight Sun to light the golden shore Moon, the silver sea Stars to twinkle galaxies Of love on you and me Lanterns shed a misty glow Hearth a warming flame Candle sparkles in your eyes And whispers out your name If I could somehow capture All the light that they impart It wouldn’t match the radiance Of love within my heart So let the darkness fall upon us Let the love light shine And I will light the fires Of the passion that is mine The galaxies are incidental Let the starlight be And moon will still glow softly On the crests of silver sea Let a single candle wick Burn into the night And you and I will warmly bathe In halos of it’s light The flickering flame will softly glow Upon your silken skin And light the beauty of the love That’s waiting there within Sun to light the golden shore. Moon, the silver sea Candle’s flame to light our love In waves of ecstasy Elizabeth Santos |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Liz~ Oh, girl, you do shine some wonderful images into my mind, my dear friend. This is absolutely breathtaking. I love it!!! (Now, where did I leave those matches???)  Love YA~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Liz, The kind of love you speak of here could only be blessed by God and I am so glad it is you that has such a perfect love in your life, what beauty this poetry is filled with trully magnificent. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Liz, You amaze me every single time I read one of your poems. You are an incredable poet. I don't know what else to say but thank you. ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ The flickering candle and the celestial lights - what breathtaking comparisons of the glow of love. Wonderfully done, dear lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Terry, Cerenity, Rosepetals, and Marge Now what are we all doing up so late? I'm heading for bed, how about you, as soon as Terry finds the matches. Thank you all for your midnight comments See you in the morning Love Liz |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Brilliant! Shines with the light of a million candles!  |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
That 'silken skin'ed devil sounds like one lucky person - beautiful Liz - truly |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
PDV, THank you for the glowing comments Bill, A we say, it's just a poem. Thank you for your comments Liz |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now this one seems to have been sent from angels and the candles lit from heaven itself....wow...is all I can say (without getting into trouble )!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Now this is a very special poem. And will touch every one who reads it. Love Sy |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
 Oh, oh oh, love it, love this one, absolutely enjoyed all of it! Goes in my library. Kathleen |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz--Liz--the mood in this piece is so pleasing and soft...so beautifully done! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Mark, You don't need to say any more. I thank you for your lovely comments Sy, if it touched you, I am happy Kathleen, Thank you for the lovely candle Martie, So glad you liked this one Liz |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
"It's just a poem" does not apply to anything you write, Liz. The English language is transformed into a magical instrument when in your hands and the true illumination comes from the beauty of your verse....I like your poetry, by the way  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Balladeer, What an incredible response. But it seems to me, this could have been in reverse (I like your poetry, too) Thank you, my dear friend Liz |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
wow! so very romantic! Deb |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Another glowing example of your talent!! Just beautiful, Elizabeth!! Denise |
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