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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Gathering Roses ~*Marge Tindal*~ Velveteen petals lightly strewn along arbored pathways of the heart Gathering now the fragrant memories the roses do impart Evermore this wafting scent where once the petals grew Pressed now between the pages of never forgotten scent of you Dried remains of rose once bloomed Clinging to the memories of one gone too soon Gathering roses in my heart A bouquet of Mother's grace softly breathes across the ages now in memory's crystal vase *In tender memory of my mother Beverly Drury Cowart Adams 3/31/1925 - 10/04/1995 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 10-02-2000).] |
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Tears_of_Grace Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 50 |
It seems to be Mother's day here at Passions today, I just read another dedication to a mother, how tenderly written this is as well. The hearts here are beautiful. |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Any poem about a rose automatically has my seal of approval, as this one did. But yours could have stood on its own, Marge. Beautiful words. Elizabeth Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near... hedeservesbetter@hotmail.com |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
wow..this is a beautiful write for your mother...she must have been a very special lady  hugs, dg< !signature--> theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 10-01-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
A rose for you and one for your mother as well. Your love for her shines in this one and I know that she is looking down from heaven right now cherishing you so, just as we all do here. She has every reason in the world to be proud of you and with all that you do with so many less fortuante than us you offer another praise of love to her and honor as well. Luv ya my sweet Cherokee friend!!!!!  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"Gather ye rosebuds, while ye may..." Touching again, Marge...special lady, you... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I know she was a beautiful woman warm and loving...how else could she have a daughter such as you? |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
This is beautiful, Marge! I loved it! sp |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Marge, To me the rose is the most loving and beautiful of all flowers and I feel God gave us the rose as an earthly exsample of what heaven shall be like, and you have shown your mother as well as the whole world the greatest love a daughter can give her mother, I am sure that she carries a gleam in her eyes and a tear on her cheek for you right now, this is beyond beautiful friend it is graced with love by a trully loving soul and I am so glad I know you friend. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Eighty years gives us bountiful time to gather lots of lovely roses... and yet we miss our loved ones still... Beautifully done, Marge..  |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Poignant and beautifully written, Marge. Corinne |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Such a beautiful tribute Marge. I am sure that she has her white feathered wings spread as she flies through the heavens, joyously singing of her pride for you. Bonnie |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Marge~ Hi, lovely lady! This is absolutley beautiful. I couldn't think of a more wonderful tribute than to put your love into words, my dear. And you always do it with such beauty and grace that it cannot be matched. Thank you, my friend. I love this, and I love you for being my friend. Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Marge, This is precious, what a wonderful tribute to your mother. God bless you as you remember her and honor her with these lovely words. Kathleen |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~marge oh how i related to this one as i'm sure you know. beautiful writing from the depths of your soul. hang onto the memories m'friend. they are sometimes all we have...and what get us through some of our darkest moments. i have faith that both of our Moms are up in the kingdom of Heaven and watching over us both smiling and very proud. Thank you for all the lovely comments you make to my work. I sit in true awe of yours! Beautiful penmenship you weave!! Love ya, Amy "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Marge... I cannot add anymore to what's already been said, except that it is a very beautiful tribute to your Mother......  Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
ENJOYED IT!!!!!!!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge, my friend, did you know your Mother is holding out Pink Roses for you? She is. Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
how simply beautiful your heartfelt tip pen is... GE |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--I constantly see how flowers bring loving memories...this is a touching and tender look at love. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
...roses for you and your mother. Marge- This is absolutely beautiful. Your love for your mother definitely shines through in this piece. Sounds like, not only was your mother a very special lady, but very blessed as well to have a daughter like you. love you, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is a very beautiful, very tender tribute to your mother, Marge. Very lovely. Denise |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Very loving, very tender...... Beautiful as I'm sure your mother was. ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
I wish I knew how to put all those jpeg's/gif's in like ya alls... But you know where my Rose is don't cha..! |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
I am sure that when this bloomed in your heart, there were tears in heaven. Tears of joy from your mothers spirit Wonderful. TLS |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge this is so beautiful and a lovely poem in memory of your mother. These words say so much HUGS Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Friends~ Please know that your replies lend comfort to this aching heart. I appreciate each of you and will be back to my old self ... honestly ! Thank you for holding my heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Oh, Marge, this is so beautiful. The last verse just brought me to tears. Your magical pen does capture so well the sentiments and the love and memories of our mothers. Love and hugs Liz |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Marge, I guess I'm not very good at trying to cheer, you've seen our hearts and you know your a dear. You've helped me out of so many a scrap around here. From my heart I say Thank you. To everything there is a season_and for you I believe it's time to live and write again. Missing you, Dale |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Wow, what an excellent piece you've written here Marge! I mean every line and every stanza was very beautiful. I would rate this piece in the top ten of your poetic gems. Take care and have a great day! Nathan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ Me too, sweetie. Lucky~ Your loving spirit would light up anyone's life ! I can see why Rosemary loves you so. Thank you for letting me be your friend. Nate~ My friend, you are precious. *My sincerest thanks to each of you for the thoughtful understanding. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
((((((((((big hugs ))))))))))))) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ You have brought tears to my eyes my friend. They are tears of sweet remembrance for my mother who died eight years ago. The loss is immense especially lately. My heart goes out to you. I know how hard it is to lose someone you were so close to and loved so much. She would be proud to read this one I think. *HUGS* to you. Love ya. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
although I lost my mother over 51 years ago - you brought back every sweet fond loving memory - Thank you |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Dearest Marge, What beautiful sentiments you have shared here. I know that I can't say anything to take your pain away...but please allow me to offer these few words of comfort and encouragement: "Serve God, love me (and all others blessed enough to have a place in your heart) and mend" WILLIAM SHAKESPEARE I love you...may my love float to you on the breeze that rustles the leaf of the tree and warm your heart. Love and hugs Your Lil' Lizzie |
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