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Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02
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Forest Lake, MN, USA

0 posted 2000-10-01 10:07 PM



Why aren’t you here right now
To mend this aching heart
To make this spirit soar
And make this dream come true

Why aren’t you here right now
In my arms held so tight
With lips pressed to mine
To make the world anew

Why aren’t you here right now
I love you so
I know the reason why
But still my heart asks

Why aren’t you here right now
Oh heart after mine
I long for you, love
And Ill wait for you

Keith Wesley Mullin

Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you.


© Copyright 2000 Keith W. Mullin - All Rights Reserved
snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
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KS
1 posted 2000-10-01 10:14 PM


Oh, how I know that feeling!  
There never is a logical answer to that question, is there?
Great poem!  Loved it!!  

sp

Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
2 posted 2000-10-01 10:32 PM


~keith

are you reading my mind?? seems you and i surely are living in similar situations! hope you get the love you deserve. i have faith...and i pass some along to you
take care.
amy  

"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"

Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02
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Forest Lake, MN, USA
3 posted 2000-10-02 10:20 PM


Thank you both for replying.

Snowpants:  Is there any sort of logic involved in love?

Aimster:  No, Im not reading your mind, but I feel for you.  Ill take some of your faith, and in return give you some of my hope.  Good luck.

Thanks again for responding

Keith W. Mullin

Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you.


Waverly917
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since 2000-09-23
Posts 90
Hugo, MN
4 posted 2000-10-02 10:47 PM


Just close your eyes and think of your love and she will be right there.  I agree with Aimster Are you reading my mind?

Abra

"So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains
And we never even know we have the key."
-Already Gone, The Eagles

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