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Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

0 posted 2000-10-01 09:14 PM


We don't need nothing more
Than what we already got
The deepest of love and caring
Things that surely can't be bought

Living on the wind
Just you and me
And every day I realize I love you more
Each day a brand new reality

Thoughts of you are always on my mind
Not a day goes by that I don't think of you
And if I close my eyes real tight
I can make all my wishes come true

I can feel you here with me tonight
As I look up at the star-filled sky
Living on the wind
I softly let out a sigh

Missing you so much
Tears begin slowly escaping my eye
A thousand miles seperates us
I try so hard not to cry

I know that you love me
You have told me in each letter you send
Until that day
Here's to you and me...and living on the wind




"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"

© Copyright 2000 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
The Lonely Stranger
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 361
Upstate, NY, USA
1 posted 2000-10-01 09:20 PM


<You have told me in each letter you send
Until that day
Here's to you and me...and living on the wind>>

This line leaves me wondring......pray tell Amy, What happened ? Perhaps material for a sequel poem??

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2000-10-01 09:31 PM


What an awesome piece and I know how hard it is to love from a distance but patience and commitment will get you there and it will twice as sweet in the end.  Excellent write my friend and it is so nice to see you back among us.
Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA
3 posted 2000-10-01 10:21 PM


This is very beautiful.  I love it.  It actualy made a tear run down my cheak.  Im living in a very similar situation.  Hope it works out for you.

Keith

Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you.


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