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Do You Whisper My Name?

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Kit McCallum
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            Do You Whisper My Name?

In the dark of the night, do you whisper my name?
Do you call to me softly in dreams far away?

Do I come to your side, and partake of your heart?
Do we bask in the heat as our passions impart?
Do you murmur the words that I'm yearning to hear?
Do I answer you softly with words to endear?

Do our bodies entwine in the heat of the night?
Do we satisfy longings as spirits unite?
Do you gently caress all my worries away?
Do I fall then to slumber till break of new day?

In the dawn of the morn, do you reach out in vain,
To discover ... 'twas only a dream that remained?

/Kit McCallum


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1 posted 10-01-2000 08:32 PM       View Profile for BSC   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BSC

What a wonderful dream Kit!!!! So gently and tenderly written.  Beautiful!!!  Bonnie
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Oh Kit this is beautiful.  This has touched my heart in a personal way, as it is a dream I have had many times.
Thank You.

......beth

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Kit,

This is an awesome dream you have written of.  I think we have all been there at one time or another . . . only to wake up alone the next day and say wow it seemed so real!!     Great writing here.

Lone Wolf


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O for an icon that denotes two hands clapping...

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Kit~
beautiful writing you have penned here! sweet sentiments from your heart indeed. i always love reading your work and here is a perfect example why.
take care.
amy  

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Kit,

    I like this poem So tenderly written.. I know I have wondered these exact things many times in the past.




~~Tara aka rp25 :o)
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Have awoken many a time from this dream, wishing to fall back asleep..... thank you for sharing this....

GE
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so softly beautiful...whew....just perfect  
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Beautiful poem,just beautiful!!!!!!!!!
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{yes but shhhhhh don't tell anyone.... }
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Kidding....LOL...this was a lovely verse of a dream that I am sure alot of have at one time or another...great write my friend.
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I never remember my dreams
but then again perhaps I haven't
had any quite like this

Rex
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Kit...dreams can be treasures, each night a new adventure...thank you for sharing this beautiful one.
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Sweet Dreams baby...James
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Y   E   S   !!!

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~Bonnie:  Thank you so much Bonnie I appreciate you reading! Many thanks!  

~Beth:  And what a lovely dream for both, thanks so much Beth, I'm glad you enjoyed!  

~LoneWolf:  Nothing worse than realizing it's been a dream quick the Niquil! LOL, thanks LoneWolf!  

~Sunshine:  Thanks for the applause Karilea I've never seen that one before, but I'll happily accept!  

~Amy:  And I always love to read your poetry and responses Amy for the same reasons, thank you so much!  

~RosePetals:  Keeps you wondering and guessing sometimes doesn't it RosePetals?  Thanks so much!  

~GreenEyes:  Lets order that second bottle of Niquil GreenEyes thanks for reading and  enjoying!  

~Jinxed: Oh, thank you very much I so appreciate it Jinxed, thank you!  

~Vandana:  Wow thank you Vandana, I really appreciate it!!!!!!  

~Mark:  (OK shhhhh our little secret)  

~Mark:  OK, now I'm telling! LOL thanks for the double response Mark, you know I appreciate your words so much!  

~Rex:  Oh Rex that won't do! I'm going to have to drop you off a "dream-catcher" or something to help you I wouldn't want you to miss out on such adventures!  Thanks for reading Rex!  

~Martie:  Treasures and adventures indeed Martie I love it when I can remember some vividly (even the scary ones) LOL, thanks Martie!  

~James:  Oh you charmer sweet dreams to you too James,  LOL  

~Balladeer: ROFL! Well now, if you'd stop "whispering" I might actually hear ya next time!!! LOL  

With much appreciation to all,
/Kit
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hmmm how familiar this sounds, right i'm takking the batterys out of my alarm clock in future

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.

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Bravo on this one!
Absolutely stunning!
Liz
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Absolutely beautiful, Kit!!

Denise
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Kit~
To grant a wish is my pleasure
after reading this delightful piece.

~*Marge*~


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A stunning piece of work - and yes - last night in fact ~S~

~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning.

~ Billy Wilder
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Beautiful! A joy to read. Would be more a joy to experience.....oh well!
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Kit~ I love this and relate soooo well. I have dreams like this, then wonder if the person I was dreaming of had the same dream.... -SEA
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~Maria:  Thanks for reading Maria ... and that sounds like a great idea!  

~Liz:  Thank you so much for the Bravo me twin, much appreciated!  

~Denise:  I'm glad you enjoyed Denise ... thank you so much for the "beautiful"!  

~Marge:  Ah Marge ... you're responses always bring a smile to my face ... thank you!!!  

~Wilfred:  Aha! So you were the voice I was hearing then???   Thanks so much for the lovely comment Wilfred!  

~Seraphin:  A joy to experience indeed! Thanks so much for reading Seaphin!  

~SEA:  Sigh ... me too SEA, funny how it works that way isn't it? Thanks so much!  

Much appreciation to all,
/Kit
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