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An Angel Gets Her WIngs
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An Angel Gets Her WIngs |
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Cheryl Flemming Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 102 |
As I sit under This big oak tree A little girl Approaches me With her clothes torn and tattered Her eyes filled with tears and pain She says can you please help me As it begins to rain I am trying to find my mommy and daddy They had to go away But they promised before they left me They wouldn't be far away They said when I look up to the heaven's And see the shining stars That they would be watching over me Wherever they are I began to cry As we looked up to the evening sky I pulled her close and said Your mommy and daddy didn't lie They have gone to heaven Not far away And you will all be Together again someday She wrapped her arms around me And held me so tight She whispered soft and gentle I'm going to be with them tonight I closed my eyes and dried my tears And when I opened them Two angels appeared We've come to get our baby And take her to heaven Today our little angel Got her little wings. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so touching and so lovely, Cheryl. Very well written! Denise |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Cheryl~ this was so sad but yet so beautiful. im sort of at a loss of words right now. just beautiful though!! amy  "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cheryl, Well written, Enjoyed the read. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Okay so a cowboy can have a moment of release can't he? This one truely brought tears to my eyes. This is one beautiful piece of work and you should be commended on your thoroughness of painting the picture in our minds. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep, tears in my eyes too |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Cheryl~I loved this! A very sweet story and well written. Elizabeth Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near... hedeservesbetter@hotmail.com |
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Tears_of_Grace Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 50 |
You certainly pulled some tears with your poem. Beautiful and very touching. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
this is so sadly sweet....very beautiful.. and i love the way its written hugs, dg theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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Cheryl Flemming Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 102 |
Thank you so much everyone.Your words bring a smile to my heart.When I was writing this it didn't bother me but when I stopped and read the whole poem it brought tears to my eyes.This is one of my favorite forum not only for the beautiful poetry but for your compassion for other's.Sometimes I get a big smile just reading the uplifting comments to someone else's work. |
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