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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2000-10-01 05:29 PM



~Mr Racoon vs Mr Dragon Fly

Sitting on my porch swing enjoying the breeze
saw a racoon in the distance sitting by a tree
seems he was waiting to dig in my trash
patient as can be...same as me

I call on my buddy, Mr Dragon Fly
The Zip It Man... cut him a flip if you can
zipping in the wind, he swoops right in
missed his mark, stopped short with a crash
hit the tree, by an inch or three

Round two, aim for the nose
black eyes are nothing new
bullseye! hit the mark!
flipped Mr Racoon right off his seat
he punched at the air, not knowing who dared

Laughing all the way, to claim his fame
Mr Dragon fly flutters, but feels no pain
a bit worn and torn, but ready to battle
ain't this a fun game!


BloomingRose


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Mark Bohannan
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1 posted 2000-10-01 05:49 PM


Yeah this is a fun game alright.  You have met the challenge well my friend and I am amazed at how well you did it too.  Well, not actually as I know that you are completely capable of meeting any challenge you are faced with.  Wonderful write my friend and you know I am smiling big now...real big and chuckling as well.  Thank you so much for taking on this challenge.
BloomingRose
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2 posted 2000-10-01 10:23 PM


Mark,
I figured mischievous Mr Racoon had it coming. You know how they are when food is on their mind.

Deb

Sunshine
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3 posted 2000-10-05 09:55 PM


Well, I'm glad I found this...created a comic image in my mind...a lot of fun!  Thanks for posting it!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ



BloomingRose
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4 posted 2000-10-05 10:19 PM


Sunshine~ Thanks again. Got one for us too?
Love to read the funny ones.

Deb  

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