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Wilfred Yeats
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0 posted 2000-10-01 05:25 PM



(Skirting the limits again   )

Late night - rolling in bed
You roll too - nothing is said
Contact made, bodies touch
Like Pavlovian pups, feeling much

Stimulus - response, autonomic
My skin tingles, thoughts atomic
More contact -more stimulus
More response, thinking clouds cumulus

"What about Our angels sleeping?"
"Can take care of that"  said leaping
Rose and chaired the door 'neath handle
To the dresser - lit a candle

Sleep had quick begun to nod you
Sliding back in bed I flew
Quietly, like spoons in a chest
Fitting together head to rest

Behind yours upon the pillow
Arm on your side soft as willow
Hear your low voice hum "Mmmmm" slight
Holding tight, spoons in the night

Cup my favorite and nuzzle neck
Warmth builds, closeness increases
Laying palm on nether region
Savor flavor, feelings legion

Fingers intruding, quiet reigns
Finger moves up, where it deigns
Spreading pleasure, kisses deepen
You turn on your back, your kiss creepin'

Draw me down, hand behind my head
To luscious kiss, easily led
Tongues explore, sweet like fresh bread
I'm in heaven, Love our bed

Then finding succulence becomes a feast
Kisses pouring everywhere
Two tame animals - now fierce beast
Leaving wetness on skin that's bare

Hand drawn further in wetness
Motions increasing, also devotion
A cry begins, cover mouth with mine
Our tongues meet again, feeling divine

Squirming's increasing
You roll back to 'spoons'
I fit in - I nearly swoon
Soft and sweet, oh so neat

Take my finger in your mouth
Gently beginning reciprocal moves
Popsicle melting, flavors of south
Returning digit back to its place
More fingers moving, hands interlace

Faces are now buried
Yours in your pillow down
Mine in your neck muffling sound
Passion's now pound

Feelings increased, pressure released
Bodies subsiding, spoons residing
Lovingly at rest, two birds in their nest.


~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning.

~ Billy Wilder

© Copyright 2000 Wilfred Yeats - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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1 posted 2000-10-01 05:36 PM


Offhand I would say that this is not "skirting the limits" ,
but rather weaving back and forth
over all kinds of boundaries
I loved it
Liz

Wilfred Yeats
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2 posted 2000-10-01 06:57 PM


Liz-
Love can come by 'leaps and bound(aries)' and heat rises in waves distorting vision making mirages - reality comes from touch -  
I crave the wider auddience of Open - Feel the frutration of the few that admit they enjoy the heat of adult - watch the 13 there languish - because I did not write them to pass - or did not realize they might pass here. Thank you for your reply and courage.


~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning.

~ Billy Wilder

Martie
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3 posted 2000-10-02 01:20 AM


Bill---Two spoons, two birds....very hot...!!

seraphin
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4 posted 2000-10-02 01:23 AM


Once again, I am in awe! You do have a way about you!!
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
5 posted 2000-10-02 01:35 AM


Bodies subsiding, spoons residing

BILL my man.....have you any idea......yeah I guess you do...lol.....you my friend are one talented little bugger with your words and the images they send.  BTW.....the candle thing....only try it on one that you know REAL well.....none of this Don Juan or Mr. Romance for me..... just straight from the heart for one I love.  Excellent penning once again.

Wilfred Yeats
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6 posted 2000-10-02 09:57 AM


Martie-

Two's the magic number - and with butterflies and flowers - birds rank high in my sense of loving images - Thank you  

Seraphin-

~S~ - I really appreciate your response

Thank you

Mark-

My humble thanks - kind sir - admiring words from a master like yourself -rate very high with me.
Oh - and the candles - Ok - I'll accept the 'single special lady' -  The final question:
the magic number: "89" - why not "88" or "90"? - My guess: the combined Ages? or perhaps the year you met? - (jes nosey  

Irish Rose
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7 posted 2000-10-02 10:01 AM


There's nothing languishing about this, it's lovely in it's sincerity and refreshing in it's sensuality. Good job.


Kathleen



Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
8 posted 2000-10-02 10:05 AM


eighty nine because I counted what I had in my house and that is what I came up with....that is it....simple and to the point nothing fancy lol...besides it did sound poetically fitting as well.   Hope you are not disappointed
Kethry
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9 posted 2000-10-02 04:25 PM


Wil, I have one thing to say to you.
Naughty, naughty, Do it again.

Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
10 posted 2000-10-02 04:31 PM




Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


Balladeer
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11 posted 2000-10-02 04:38 PM


Well, Bill, as a moderator here, because I know you are a decent and sincere poet, I'm going to let this one pass but I have to warn you...please do it again  
Wilfred Yeats
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12 posted 2000-10-02 10:45 PM


Kathleen-
I try always to be sincere ~G~ - thank you

Mark -
Another thought: 20 better? Thanks for clearing up my concerns ~G~

Kethry-
Ok - I will try ~S~ thank you

Karilea-
Love the bright sunshine - thank you

'Deer-
I will do my best - Thank you ~G~

~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning.

~ Billy Wilder

Paula Finn
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missouri
13 posted 2000-10-02 11:55 PM


MMMMMMMM...you just keep getting me...well lets not skirt that one LOL
rosepetals25
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14 posted 2000-10-03 12:25 PM


Wil

   Whew!  My goodness! Is it getting a little warm in here?   I loved it! ~G~

Wilfred Yeats
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15 posted 2000-10-03 08:30 PM


Paula - Perhaps raise the skirt? ~G~

RosePetals25-
It's too early to turn the AC off - ~G~!

Thank you both ~S~

~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning.

~ Billy Wilder

lucky
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16 posted 2000-10-07 01:05 PM


Bill,

Brings back many a happy memory... How young did you say you were..? I just had a passing thought... How many drafts you got on this one... Ho, ho... he, heeee.

I have to tell you, risque with only your Finesse.

Nice nice work friend, Dale


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