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Kethry
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0 posted 2000-10-01 04:28 PM


Lorelei and  Long John,
together fifteen years
he liked to keep it simple
she liked keeping him, bare reared
chained up to her kitchen bench
butt naked to the world
as he washed and wiped those dishes
with toes that neatly curled

Lorelei, my Lorelei
since it's been, quite a while
do you think that we could do it!
could we do it doggy style?

Lorelei looked in horror
what do you think I am
Long John you surprise me
you're not that sort of man

Then Long John sighed
and turned away, it just I love you so
it would be an experience
that we'd both enjoy I know.

Go to bed right now! Long John
Lorelei did storm
I'll be up there shortly,
my long johns, can keep me warm

The next day, once again in jest
Long John asked, … can we,
could we do it doggy style
it just comes naturally

It could add a little something
that we've not known before
come on, I've been so patient
for fifteen years or more

Then Lorelei took pity
on Long John, and she said
I'll have to think about it
though it fills me full of dread

Lorelei said I'll tell you,
but all conditions hear
the answer's yes, but you know…
left Long John trembling with fear

Our neighbors are quite nosy
and they live so near
so could we do it doggy style
in an alley, FAR from here.




"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

© Copyright 2000 Lynne Dale - All Rights Reserved
Lorelei54
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1 posted 2000-10-01 04:51 PM



Cute story Lynne...

[This message has been edited by Lorelei54 (edited 10-02-2000).]

Kethry
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2 posted 2000-10-01 04:57 PM


Lorelei, good afternoon.
thanks for your prompt and charming response to this small joke cum poem. *oops* should be come.
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Lorelei54
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Posts 458

3 posted 2000-10-01 05:02 PM


edited due to chit-chatting by Lore

[This message has been edited by Lorelei54 (edited 10-02-2000).]

Kethry
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4 posted 2000-10-01 05:09 PM


Lorelei,
thanks, responding soon

Kethry< !signature-->

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-


[This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 10-02-2000).]

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
5 posted 2000-10-02 08:01 AM


isn't it funny, communication erase
when he talking style she talking place.
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
6 posted 2000-10-02 09:24 AM


Kethry,
OOPs I think I'm in the wrong place. Sorry
but I enjoyed. Sy PS. But it does sound like that old dog Long John.

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
7 posted 2000-10-02 09:34 AM


OOOPppppsss I thought I was in open 10....sorry guys.....LJA....stand up my man....eeewwwwwww you got one ugly looking hairy ***!!!!

Lorlei-----Nice uuuuhhhhh bounce you got there.

Kethry-Loved this one....way too funny!!!!

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
8 posted 2000-10-02 04:30 PM


Whaaaat. They were playing fetch.

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

jlocke
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since 2000-09-10
Posts 169
CC,TX
9 posted 2000-10-02 05:31 PM


Uhhhh...hmmmm...well...uh...nice...but...is this in the right place?

Do what thou wilt shall be the whole of the law.
Love is the law, love under will.


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