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Lavender Night |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Is this title suitable, or would you have a suggestion for a better title?  ~Lavender Night~ Lavender roses and soft fingertips euphoria breezes in our souls at the touch of our lips only sweet lavender bloom and kisses whisper that you're mine, wrapped in embrace we sway to it's rhythm, willing prisoners of sensations sublime irresistable currents of passion seduces, the scent of love lingers, teasing through the air I gaze into your ember eyes of gentle fire, your fingertips trace the auburn highlights of my hair, in rapturous encounters, entangled beauty we love each other entranced fiery candlelight pours it glow with intensity upon glistening skin, as we dance, erotically romanced euphoria breezes in our souls at the touch of our lips mesmerized by lavender roses and soft fingertips *By Melissa Honeybee* < !signature--> The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 10-01-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Melissa, my little bee...Lavender Softly comes to mind... and I enjoyed all the words... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Melissa, I like the title as is I think it fits wonderfully. I also like the poem.. well written  (I just love that smilie .. hehe)~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Melissa! I like Sunshine's suggestion. . . and I also have one. . . lavender whispers Beautiful my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
AHHHHHh the perfect night of love and passioin. Excellent reading that you have place before us my friend. Loved it through and through. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Lavendar Sigh~ Lavendar Glow~ actually I like yours and Suns too ... but I LOVE the beautiful images you have painted here for us simply superb sensual writing Melis. one of my favs of yours me thinks jm |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Melissa, I personally lean toward Lavender sighs, but your title is just fine as is the rest of the poem. Kethry. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
I love the title Melissa....it's what drew me to the poem. Which is simply beautiful btw. Wonderful piece. Bonnie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ This is just romantically lovely. Lavender is a lovely color and a heavenly fragrance ... so a Lavender Night seems perfect to me. Conjures up a romantic fragrance in my mind. Very, very well done, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Tears_of_Grace Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 50 |
A perfect title already I think. As was already stated the lavender brings about romantic thoughts and your poem was just as romantic as the blossoms. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you everyone, I'm so glad that you enjoyed my poem. I will probably keep the title as is now Thank for your suggestions, I liked Lavender WhispersTake care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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