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Xeonox
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0 posted 2000-10-01 01:09 AM


Truth nourishes ones soul,
While a  lie decapitates it once more,
Bravery brings forth fame and riches,
While cowardice blankets one with leeches,
Honesty rewards itself ,
While corruption feeds all through oneself,
Patience provides answers to all,
While irritation heeds no such call,
Reliance on others we choose to accept,
While trust in ourselves we sometimes dissipate,
Communication exist with a common goal,
While silence reaches through devils bowl.
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Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)




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Kethry
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1 posted 2000-10-01 01:18 AM


Wow Xeonox,
powerful write, it gives a whole new meaning to the power of words to hurt and heal.
Well done
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Xeonox
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2 posted 2000-10-02 12:06 PM


Thanks for replying Kethry. Thank you for the comments

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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3 posted 2000-10-03 12:40 PM


No way is this slipping off the page...back to the top with this beauty!!!
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4 posted 2000-10-03 12:44 PM


Xeonox,

    Wow.. what a truthful and powerful message you send with this.  Very well put.

~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

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5 posted 2000-10-04 03:49 AM


This one was sitting on the back page yelling for me....hey....ya missed me!!!!
Don't know how that happened but I am glad that it had such power in it's voice.  Very nice write and so much wisdom and truth in it.  

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6 posted 2000-10-04 08:56 PM


Thank you mark, rose and the others.


Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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