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God took Another Angel(with another part added)
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God took Another Angel(with another part added) |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
I lost my friend today, God. I really don't know what to say. You called her to you, God In a very special way I want to scream and cry, God. But that won't bring her back During school we cried, God And asked the simple question WHY? Are you happy now, God Is the driver going to live? I know it really wasn't his fault, God. He took more than he knew to give Her funeral's on friday, God Coincidentally a half day We're going to be torn apart,God And cry a lot and even laugh a little I lost my friend today, God And I hurt so much inside. Are you going to help me, God When I can't help but break down? I can't ask for that much, God I could have stopped the wreck But I really want to know, God Are you going to take her in? --------------------------------------------------- A year later: I still miss my friend a lot, God Sometimes I still cry But mostly I just smile, God And talk to all those who know her They make me laugh, God And be happy that I knew her Her sister has been awesome, God Such a rock of strength Please let her family be happy, God They have dealt with so much And thank you so very much, God For though I briefly knew her I can see why she was loved so much! < !signature--> Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. [This message has been edited by Cuddlez (edited 10-02-2000).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sad poem Cuddlez, sometimes we don't have any answers and that's always hard. sorry about your friend if it's true. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Cuddlez~ A very sad piece, if this is real I HUG you and pray for you that you feel god's love and his strength to understand that we don't know why this sort of thing has to happen to those so young but know that he will take care of her and love her very much and she will be looking down on you and watching over you from afar. Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I'm so sorry for your loss Cuddlez. You've express many questions and thoughts that so many of us do in these difficult times, and you've expressed them so beautifully from your heart. Best wishes and hugs to you, /Kit |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
All I can say is He has His reasons and nothing you could have done could have changed what happened if He chose to call her home. I realize that doesnt really comfort but please dont blame yourself |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Its real but an older poem- Oct. 4 of last year was when the accident happened. Just saw an old truck that looked exactly like the one the rollover wrecked in and there's been oh boy almost a year thoughts going around in my mind. Thanks for your comments, I know there are reasons for everything... I just don't always want to look for/understand em. I'd rather feel sorry for myself  )Again thanks for your replies... Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
i have been typing, backspacing, typing, and then deleting just trying to think of what to say. i won't dispense the "mysterious ways" bit. and truthfully, God and me don't really see eye to eye anymore, so i can't vouch for him or heaven. But we should only cry when angels fall, and i'll tell ya, i got a little misty readin' this one. your friend's stuggle may or may not be over, but your's is to now face this. good luck.< !signature--> Everyone's got their demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. [This message has been edited by Ethan_Halo (edited 10-01-2000).] |
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Tears_of_Grace Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 50 |
You've brought tears to my eyes, I'm so sorry for the loss of your friend, death brings many questions and not many answers in most cases. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This one has me in tears as well and I know that it is not easy when you don't know the intentions of God but one day you will. You must hold on to the faith that all things are as they should be and cherish those memories that are so sweet. It took alot of strength in you to pen this and you did it flawlessy. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I am so sorry for the loss of your friend. It's hard to make sense of it, but I think God calls those he needs...your friend must have been special!  |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Yup, Toni was very special and everyone thought she was an angel... She always had an amazing ability to be "up and happy." Over 450 kids went to her funeral.. 900 or so people total.I didn't even really know her, but I've been around people who have been ). Oh yah, the driver did live... No one thought he would but luckily he did. Ethan: Been there before, life and its workings can be difficult to understand, eh? Tears: Thank you so much for replying ~. I like your name a lot...Mark: I've been cherishing these memories a lot. Best one is of a movie they are doing a sequel on. Going to be interesting watching that movie... Poet: Thats what I've been told, and I'm so hoping its true! Thanks all for replying Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Anyone else going to reply? Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Tears_of_Grace Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 50 |
I'm glad I came back to read what you added, a beautiful sequel to the first one. It's comforting to be around those that can share your memories. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
an old poem, with new feelings, "time health the wounds", and can be so true, its important to behold your faith, thank you for your comment on my poem, and I guess that what I wrote for you now, would count for me either, so I will behold my faith, and take your advice.  |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Charisma and tears of grace: thank you! Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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