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Past Jupiter And Mars
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Past Jupiter And Mars |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Past Jupiter And Mars ~*Marge Tindal*~ I think I'll stick around a while and fall in love with you That is unless you've something else you would rather do Like catch a star and just hold on as this galaxy we explore Never touching earth again across the night we'll soar Heart on heart, not looking back twinkling among the stars Hold my hand and fly with me past Jupiter and Mars We will fly this night again all the way through twilight's door Walking 'cross the Milky Way in love forevermore I think I'll stick around a while and fall in love with you That is unless you've something else that you would rather do And if you should decide that you've time enough to play Take my hand - let's travel far before night turns into day ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--your solar energy is showing...loved this! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ah...and Jupiter just went retrograde yesterday...(another fun fact from serenity) A beauty indeed and a nice companion to Mr. Brooks, Comet and the Sun...I salute ya both! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ahhhhh me thinks Margie-gators planets are all in align  me thinks shes found her lucky star ... love this gem ...it sparkles like the poet who wrote it later-star-power-gator me |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Marge, this captivates the stargazer in me. Very nice indeed  ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -me, Song of Gesture |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Marge Such fun in your poetry! Love it! deb |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
tell me, marge, do they REALLY have ice cream on jupiter? hmmmm... just curious  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Solar Sister ... I love ya' ! Serenity~ Hey ... I know retrograde ! Love it ! JanetMarie~ Swinging on a star for sure, gal ! Chanson~ Glad to know you're captivated. The stars do that to me too ! BloomingRose~ I do thank you for letting me know you enjoy it. Doreen~ Nah !  But ... we DO have Mars Bars ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very beautiful Marge! Your poetry always has such a lovely ring to it, and this is no exception. Well done! *Krista Knutson* "Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Okay so now you are dancing in the stars as well. I love seeing the heavens get crowded more and more each day. SUPERB piece from you my friend. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Unless there's something else I'd rather do? Dear Marge, it would be wonderful to soar on high with you! Past Earth and Mars and Jupiter and Saturn with its rings Amid the showers of meteors and all celestial things We'll join hands in the Milky Way, get hot as Mercury And I will give my love to you Intra-Venus-ly!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Krista~ Thank you, hon ! MarkB~ Dancing the night away ! And in good company too ! Balladeer~ I LOVE IT ! Now how am I supposed to get to sleep knowing Venus is rising ???? You're too hot to handle ... but I'm willing to go down trying !  Oooooooooooh ! Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Marge girl What wonderful images this gives...thanks for a most delightful read as always Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Great Marge, I'll turn the cold shower on for Balladeer...lol. I love your poetry... but you already know that This is simply delightful... what a pleasant way to go to bed.... to sleep Love ya, Linda Munday |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ Fantastic!! (as usual)  -SEA |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Marge.... You are so terrific!!!!!!!!! I love to read your work.....it makes a song for my heart to sing!!!!  Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, You poems are always fun to read and bring a smile to my face Liz |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Marge - and one of the really neat things about Jupiter and Mars is that, if you let him drive, you won't have to worry about maps! But those rest stops are real far apart. I like the flow of this romantic poem. Very sweet and nicely done (as usual). |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Wow! This is totally cool! I wasn't expecting to read what I did when I saw the title of your poem, and I just loved it! Great poem!! Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This is one awesome poem, Marge! Super-lovely! Corinne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it, my friend. Linda~ LOL for the cold shower .... I know he needed it ! SEA~ I appreciate you. Sunny1~ I'm pleased to leave you a song ! Elizabeth~ You and a smile - makes for a happy me. LongJohn~ Glad to know that map scenario. Meet ya' at the next rest stop ! Saunni~ Glad you ventured in for a cosmic experience. Thanks for the reply. Corinne~ Knowing you enjoyed it is a pleasure to me. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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