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Marsha
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0 posted 09-30-2000 01:52 PM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

I dedicate this to a very very special person.

Until You

Quietly, patiently, I wait
Waiting for you to awaken me
Although I breathe softly
My blood flows gently
And my eyes are open
I do not live, I do not exist
Until you appear

When you enter my world
You flick the switch
Turning my spirit on
Your presence brings life
I'm filled with colour and light
Alive and vibrant
You transform the dull and drear
Into a sizzling, fizzing fire

I melt from the inside out
Dissolving into rainbow hues
My iced soul is bathed
In golden light
Your smile fans the flames
Building the fire higher
Engulfing my heart in heat

I drown eternally in your eyes
Caught in a mesh of fire
Only you have the key
I willingly cede the battle
Thankful to be in chains
To be a captive of your heart

Marsha




[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 09-30-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 09-30-2000 02:12 PM       View Profile for rosepetals25   Email rosepetals25   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rosepetals25

Marsha,

   Oh what a sweet touching poem to the one you love Such tenderness is expressed here.. I'm glad you happy



~~Tara aka rp25 :o)
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2 posted 09-30-2000 02:32 PM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark Bohannan

Sounds to me like someone really latched onto you and sent you through the fires of passion.  This is one sensuous poem from you and I know that this guy has got to be melting himself.  Nice to see you so happy these days.  
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3 posted 09-30-2000 02:46 PM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

Rosepetals25 thank you for your kind words. Mmm yes he is very special, and I'm glad the feelings come through. I only hope he knows how special, perhaps I ought to bring him to the site and show him.
        
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4 posted 09-30-2000 02:54 PM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

Mark you always say such nice things to me. Sensous and passionate, well there's certainly heat here, no doubt about that. As for the man this is for, I say that the fire between us is very sweet, and he's worth every flicker of the flame, and then some!
Take care
                      Marsha
Am I happy, no I'm ecstatic, didn't I say love had an amazing influence.
                                     
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5 posted 09-30-2000 06:04 PM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dgvarner

hey bubbly one!  this is awesome!! how romantic....*sigh...*  i think this may be my favorite that i've read of yours ..it flows with love and promise..and ..well...WOW!  i'm so impressed  

and just who is this mystery man..???   '

great writing bubbles!!  
hugs,dg


theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper
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6 posted 09-30-2000 07:57 PM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

Dee, love don't ask, anyway he's not your type, and boy am I glad he's not, otherwise you'd snaffle him too. (Oh great now I'll get into trouble for calling him a type) Well you know me, I've always suffered from foot and mouth, everytime I open my mouth I put my foot in it. Glad you like it, but as I say just don't put one of your gems close by this or everyone will know this is a fake and yours is the real McCoy.

Speak to you soon
                 Bubbles
(and don't stay up all night lofting you little devil!)
                            
                                     
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7 posted 09-30-2000 11:37 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

I melt from the inside out
Dissolving into rainbow hues
My iced soul is bathed
In golden light
Your smile fans the flames
Building the fire higher
Engulfing my heart in heat
==================
WOW..does all that hurt *smile* ..
I KNOW..."hurts so good"  
this a  wonderful sensual declaration ...
aint love grand ... inspires us to new heights ...
and heat LOL...OH yea
great read....well written and expressed work here
take care
jm

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8 posted 10-01-2000 04:27 AM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

Janet So you can feel the heat, can you. I must be entering a new phase, I'll call it my burning time. Does it hurt, only when the flames get out of control. It's not that I mind the fire brigade turning up. It's just those sirens they don't sound as musical as they should.
Thanks for stopping by
                        Marsha

(Now who was it who told me not to smoke in bed? Ahh well I guess I'll have to keep the flames on a gentle roar!!)
                            
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9 posted 10-02-2000 02:53 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Marsha,

This is so beautiful, its so nice to have a love like this, I wish you the best.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

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10 posted 10-04-2000 01:09 PM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

Cerenity thank you, sorry I've taken so long to reply I've had to take the 'puter to the 'puter hospital, and the dear little thing has only just come back.
I'm glad you like this.
Take care
                     Marsha
            
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So nice, I have one I feel this way about...James
 
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