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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2000-09-30 12:59 PM



TERMITE AND SNAIL


There was this termite
Just minding his own business
Munchin on some wood

All of a sudden
He noticed this snail oozing
Right across his path

He narrowed his eyes
And with a wave of his leg
Yelled “Shoo with you.. out!”

The way sluggish snail
Lifted a brow and then asked
“What? What did I do?”


Ok.. there.. lol.  I had to leave you with the challange of figuring where this is going to go?? If you are up to the challange  

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~~Tara aka rp25  

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 09-30-2000).]

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Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-09-30 01:09 PM


The termite taken
by the questioning of snail
grew angry and huffed

He promptly raised brow
took a gander at snail's shell
thinking it rare wood

one jump he was there
tasting delight in snails shell
tastebuds awakened new

that my dear poet
friend of challenge in Haiku
lies escargo's birth


[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-30-2000).]

rosepetals25
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2 posted 2000-09-30 01:31 PM



Well to say the least
You are very good my friend
And what fun it is

How about a haiku
About another rare pairing
Fish and a crickette?


~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2000-09-30 07:07 PM



Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2000-09-30 07:24 PM


RosePetals~
You've taken that Cowboy bait and caught a good one !
Very nicely done.

Now, Cowboy ... LOL !
Ewwwwwww ! @ escargot !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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