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For Sunshine- Everyday Angels- written by 11 yr. old Justien

SEA

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with you

0 posted 2000-09-29 05:45 PM

Everyday Angels
people like you
always help
and are always true

They go through their lives
and trip and stumble
their lives are hard
and are a big jumble

But they always find time
to help someone they love
they do it to be nice
and are as pure as a dove

This is for you
believe it's true,
I don't think you could find a better one~
because I made it just for you!

-Justien-

Sunshine

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1 posted 2000-09-29 05:48 PM

Justien, I certainly hope I'm the very first to say thank you!!! for this lovely poem! You've made my heart very happy today! I'm going to count you as one of my very favorite Angels, OK? Thank you again!

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

Kethry
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2 posted 2000-09-29 05:49 PM

Justein, this is very nicely written. You did a good job.
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

SEA

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with you

3 posted 2000-09-29 05:51 PM

Sunshine~ I was blown out when she handed this to me a few minutes ago. Isn't this the sweetest?! I'm glad you liked it and so is Justien, I think she's sprung!

-SEA

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song

4 posted 2000-09-29 05:56 PM

Wow...I wish I could do this good on request. SEA, I think it is time that you get Justien her own pass in her. She is too good to pass up. This was a very sweet creation and I am truely impressed. Justien, you have made her as happy as you made me with your Unicorn Town. You are one sweet little lady. Keep em coming but don't become too involved as some of us have.LOLOL

Sunshine

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5 posted 2000-09-29 11:42 PM

Justien, I had to come back in for another read, I'm just SO happy with this. Now, homework first, fun second! Happy posting!

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

vlraynes
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6 posted 2000-10-23 05:22 PM

Justien-
   wow...this is just so sweet.
   i love it...
   you've done a beautiful job
   on this one.

   hugs,
    -vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

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7 posted 2000-10-23 06:12 PM

Justien, what a wonderful piece of angels.
I bet that you must be one of them too.
beautiful work, Im really impressed

Charisma

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