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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Quicksilvering That’s what you do~ quicksilvering your way in and out of romance~ somewhere between taking a tango’s chance and bull-breaking~ sleek and smooth, oh so fleeting Montana’s winds have nothing on you~ Cowboys put their oldest boots on fence posts, it’s said~ not you you quicksilver your way into someone’s head you do and leave boot traces throughout and about tracking in one's heart and mind~ of deep heeled knowledge and pointed toe tenacity~ and leave the sighs on the winds under Montana skies~ quicksilvering their way to heaven~ < !signature--> Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 09-29-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ I LOVE THIS. Cowboys have a special place in my heart, my best friend's birthday is today and he is a cowboy.....this made me miss him that much more.  -SEA*In my library* Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sunshine, this was silver and moved too quickly. I had to read it a second time and loved it as much then. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SEA...lucky lady! Share this with him, tell me what he thinks...thank you! Kethry...how did I know you'd peek in at this one...must've been the title...thanks! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Yupppp that's what cowboys do alright. Now about this Montana "boy" hhhmmmmmm don't know about that. Teasing, this is one beautiful piece you have presented and yeah it is true....we tend to leave them boot prints mighty mighty deep. Hey, they make us promise to and then they school us for just that very thing before we are allowed to get our first pair of boots!!!! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh what a true description of a cowboy I once knew and loved. Those boots can dig themselves a hole, too, that they don't see till they fall in.. Great stuff. Sandra |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Nicely scratched out there. pardner! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Karilea - you just get better and better and better - this one to my treasure box too |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mark, just don't forget, us gals wear boots too... Sandra, lol...too true... 'Deer, it's all written on the winds... Mr. Yeats, thank you Sir, times three...I truly appreciate you taking the time to read my paltry offerings...[there's a poem in there if someone pounces quick!] Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Wonderful poem, next time that cowboy goes for the door have the lasso ready. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Brian...my lasso's ready...and so am I... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
5 seconds?? Calf roping?? LOL Reminds me. . . I have to get my Nikes back from the shoe repair!! lol Wonderful my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Good ... really good. I like the whole quick silver idea. Wonderful thoughts ... got that boot-scooting feel to it ! Love you, gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sven, it's 8 seconds, bull riding...LOL Marge, as long as you like it...that's all that counts...but it does have a country feel... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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